|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Dreams have a way of not coming to fruition the way we want. You captured that feeling well.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the passion and longing of this poem deliver!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Susan...romantic gem...you always amaze me with your works...this one is yet another example of your poetic talent...keep up the great work my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)
|Lascivious dreams with the unknown is said to be a stress healer. You have captured the feeling with your pen perfectly in this piece!
Peace and Love
|Reviewed by David Mohd
|U will find the man one day,Susan.And he will lead u not only in bed but also in heaven.
Perfect lines and a good craft.Well done my friend.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwww sensual longing romantic write!!
Readyy is not the wrd to use.....lol!!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, such a beautiful and longing write. Destiny is the key.|
|Reviewed by Alain Gracio
|WOOOOF, Im sure he will hear your calling. With beautiful and romantic writing like this how can he resist? Wish you the best
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Great write. Powerful and romantic|