|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Delightful write...and if this guy has any sense he will come running to you|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This is so pretty|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
susan's in love! and doesn't it look so pretty on her. :)
lovely write--enjoyed! i wish you the best :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)
|This piece was very lovely. As a reader I felt myself beginning to fantasize of being the suitor.
An outstanding writing, a very pleasant read.
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|New love, new explorations, let the dance begin!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, quite an alluring piece. Love these lines :
I will dance with his desires that night
Chase the comets spirit free
|Reviewed by Alain Gracio
|Your poem is full of love and longing but they all are! I have never read a poem with the sincerity and simplicity of the written word as you have written and wrote here. Your words enchanting and majestic and your prose is melodic. You have so much love inside it jumps out in your writing and I'm sure that your longing for oneness will soon come to be. Your ramblings are beautifully composed and compelling.