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You the Beloved of my heart


Hover above the threshold


Of my essence


 


You and I


Have felt the pain of separation


After only moments of love


 Yet this glory


In agony held


Alienated


Us


From the feast of


life


love


 


Thus


We


Still hungry


And perhaps


More empty


Begin the feast


Again


 


 


 

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Reviewed by Peter Paton 8/13/2004
Very perceptive and intuitive Vesna
An intense depiction of the hunger of love...which knows no bounds.

Peter
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 2/29/2004
The ravenous beast looks for life. Way to go Vesna
Reviewed by SeRaPhiMa HuMMiNgByRd 2/21/2004
~*~ Feast On!... ~*~

~*~*~*~ Shivani ~*~*~*~
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 2/21/2004
lovely
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/21/2004
Weel written again Vesna!!

Second review in same poem...yip you have two on your board!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 2/21/2004
Vesna all I can say is that you are A LOVE POWERHOSE
Reviewed by jude forese 2/20/2004
the appetite of your love seems endless ...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/20/2004
Fantastic verse...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/20/2004
(((vesna)))

stunning! both verse and pic--mesmerizing! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 2/20/2004
Vesna ... the feast of loves continues over and over again. Each time it creates greater desire in the participants. Isn't that the way love goes? It is! When it doesn't happen any longer our ship of life flounders on the shores of disaster. Beautiful poetry my Lady Fair. Hugs Bill
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/20/2004
I love this one, Vesna; very good! I also love the picture; pretty!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/20/2004
Caught up in the passion of your poetry, I can't wait to meditate on my flame and get a visit from my muse;-) Superb poem Vesna!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 2/20/2004
It's amazing, Vesna... I keep thinking of the word "consummate".. your page has it all and my eyes and head are transfixed... it may be impolite to stare at people, but I'm thrilled that it's just fine when it comes to your poetry postings.. even the shape of the body of the poem... ahhhhhh, then the reading: that's MY feast! Wonderful 'page' entirely. katy xox.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 2/20/2004
You are incredible Vesna.
Wonderful work.
John
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 2/20/2004
Hi Vesna...this is so moving...I loved it...great writing..floria
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 2/20/2004
Lovely moving poem. Excellent.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 2/20/2004
BE|AUTIFUL work that stirs the senses..and touches the heart..and hijacks the central nervous system...
Reviewed by Dale Clark 2/20/2004
Very beautiful piece.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 2/20/2004
Poets, especially, thrive on the feasts of love.
They are also the ones most starved, when the empty plates
are removed.
Yet, most of them, are already currying menus for a new
and more inspiring, celebration.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/20/2004
So lovely Vesna, This was just beautiful,

Reindeer
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