by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Friday, February 20, 2004
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You, blue eyes! Such an unfair advantage
to be marked by sky! Sky! Our cosmic womb
of life! Conceited in your circled bloom.
Adored by muddy brown-ground entourage,
or musty dusty hazel; even green’s
mesmerizing view must bow down to sky.
You, blue eyes! Startle me with clarity,
flicker-flash sun warmed glance my way! So keen
the flavor of balmy days, depthless seas,
and twinkling periwinkles seen anew.
And when you sleep, revitalize, blue
swept up to boundless lands will show life’s glee!
You blue eyes, mingle with my brown; we can
concept a world enriched by all-hued Man.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful and well written Erin!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|EXCELLENT sonnet, Erin!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderfully expressive poem. Powerful images Erin! Exceptional wording...|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Extremely powerful. Exceptional poem Erin.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Powerful well written poem!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Erin...I would recognize your poetry anywhere...it is lovely...
you have your own style girl...and I love it...floria
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Jaysus, petunia, this is a doozy! I ran straight to the bathroom to gaze into the mirror, 'sky blues' just to see if I have this kind of magic you've written here. Yep.. they're a couple of pips, they are! But, of course, the best part is when they co-mingle with the browns and hazels and greens in life. That's the REAL magic, you clever think, you. sigh.. I love this one... keeping it safe in my library. katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wow Erin, this is wonderful. Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Another beautiful write, Erin, so many descriptive words, gotta read it several times to get them all...that third paragraph for me is the best, maybe cause it has something in it about the sea...oh by the way, is it "4:20" somewhere near you? LOL! Peace thru Words, Ed & rufuz|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely, beautifully written, I loved your title,