(But… Gone with the Wind…)
I think I just thought…
Odd… haikus don’t give such pain…
Ah, perhaps just wind…
© P. J. Oszmann (2004)
Jew Be or Not Jew Be
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|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Yes indeed the best,
You put yourself to the test,
And found quite the best...
Peace Peter, Ed & Rufuz
|Reviewed by jude forese
|good one, weel done ...|
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|it is hard to tell, isn't it?
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOL! Love this one!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Terrific stuff, Peter; truly enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|Rather clever, Poet.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A Haiku is some kind of wind, like a Tyfu?|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
LOL you must have been looking over my shoulder, in trying to post my latest 'ku...what a pain!! i reaaaaaally need to take lessons on how to use the editor! *course, could be the mac and cheese i ate LOL*
this is adorable--enjoyed :) thanks for the smile
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla.