|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|OOOh William....how sad...how I felt this one....would you
believe it happens to others too ((smile))....regrets....
If only we could have the wisdom of the elder when we are
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|sad lonely and lovely
all at the sametime
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|Wonderful, wonderful write - greatly enjoyed reading it over and over!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So lovely and longing. William you are a master of romance poetry. You make your reader feel.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was beautiful and so moving William, loved this poem,
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Heart touching write, William!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A sad and moving piece. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very touching piece William.!!
This really moved me beacuase I can relate to this one!!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Sad and beautiful at the same time. You chose your words perfectly. Enjoyed reading. Lisa|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such sorrow, amongst the beauty of your words and thoughts. Very moving poetry William!|
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
|William..A sad and beautiful write..Floreann|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|For lovers make this mortal vow
Then hearts get torn apart
When fate steps in and weilds the sword
And severs loving hearts.
And so she wanders along the coast
Each morning with the mist
She says "I LOVE YOU' and she sighs
Then blows the fog a kiss.
© Susan K. Rowse
I've met your Muse. I guess she forget to mention me.
This gives me chills because I share the pain.
Love and strength,