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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
2/23/2004 |
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Welcome to the Den,
I agree with Debashish this is powerful I liked your endig....
I didnt understant {f} in this part
"There was a moment f tremor"
I have felt tremors they are scary.
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
2/23/2004 |
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Very Powerful poem, Shwetal...I can feel the power in your poem..and the life behind it..I have written a poem called Pearls were the Priests..somewhat similar..
Debashish |
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