|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|You make me hotter than Mojave(Iris Dement song-try her)in my heart-soul and mind. Just saying hello. Hope you're as well as you want to be.Your buddy forever-Jerry Andrews-willowpoet- in Little River, Texas.|
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
You are as deep as still waters - good write :0)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I prefer Marilyn. Great pretender, you got me going with this one.|
|Reviewed by Jim Compton (Reader)
|This has a reverence to it.
I feel like I should bow my head as I leave, and take care that my steps make little noise.
This, I believe, is the best work I have ever read.
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|time for a resurrection girl|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|God, it's good to be reading you again, Candy. I'm never disappointed when I come to you. Your stuff always knocks me flat. My favorite lines in this are "My body in return / for peace I could hold / close like poetry in a garden." Beautiful stuff.|
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|I've heard people use the phrase, "Fuck God!"...but not in this way. William, I thought you were God...|
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Oh my god, this is lovely, evocative and in its own way, very sensual. I wish I were God right now.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very insightful write!|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
My body in return
for peace I could hold
close like poetry in a garden.
--> love these lines.