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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/29/2004 |
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| I like Haiku, and to me, this is a beauty. |
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| Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty |
5/22/2004 |
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love the photo and the haiku
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
4/19/2004 |
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this is a good write...
is it a haiku? See my articles "my poetics [#'s 2&8]"
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
3/31/2004 |
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Great pic. Technically, haiku should not be titled. That is for poems. If you insist on the 5-7-5, you should insist on that too.
one cannot see that
which is hid behind the scenes
of one's illusions
haiku are not supposed to be commentaries on life, they are supposed to be small gems of perfection which show, not tell. They also are supposed to deal with some aspect of nature. This is a nice short poem, but it is not a haiku, at least in my opinion. The sentiments, are, of curse, meritorious. Nice poem.
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/8/2004 |
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| So true, Regis, because we dare not touch our illusions in case they fade on us - like the stuff of waking dreams. We live protecting our desired fog and smoke screens! Beautifully expressed KB |
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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
3/5/2004 |
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| nice! |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
2/26/2004 |
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I'm starting to like these haikus...truth simply expressed. Most effective.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader) |
2/26/2004 |
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| Whew! you said it with few words but very profound too.I don't know whatHAIKU means but you must deeply understand it.I have heard writting down our dreams can give us a clue to the meaning of our lives. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/26/2004 |
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| Regis....splendid Haiku....deep and profound...love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
2/26/2004 |
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| yay! |
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| Reviewed by evan horetsky |
2/25/2004 |
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very beautiful haiku, and i just love the picture.
Evan |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
2/25/2004 |
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This was sharp, and short, and straight to the point.
Very well put, my friend.
Evelyn. |
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| Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay |
2/25/2004 |
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| profound! |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
2/25/2004 |
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Said it well. . . and one can always see what is beyond the doubts of others thru their dreams.
bless you Reg/is
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
2/25/2004 |
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| How true! Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
2/25/2004 |
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| Lovely, Regis! And oh, so true. |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
2/25/2004 |
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| True....yet we all do it..great haiku...nice writing Regis..floria |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
2/24/2004 |
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Very insightful, Regis, as all your work is. Sometimes our illusions are blind to the possibilities, and they become random, instead of focused.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
2/24/2004 |
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Oh, but I do like this one... and the graphic is fitting as well. This is definatly a keeper!
(((hugs)))
♫ Jackie
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/24/2004 |
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Yes i agree
with all here
out cold!!!
love the picture |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
2/24/2004 |
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| Exceptional. Inspired write. |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/24/2004 |
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| it takes a true poet to see even the scenes of an illusion, much less what is hidden there....great thought, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/24/2004 |
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| a haiku of philosophical excellence! no illusions behind this poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/24/2004 |
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| Profound in image and words! |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
2/24/2004 |
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"Awesome"
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/24/2004 |
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Be nice if we could?
fantastic haiku |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/24/2004 |
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| Regis this is brilliant, and the art is wonderful, great combo! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/24/2004 |
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Excellent and outstanding thought, I loved this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
2/24/2004 |
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| Wow Reg, where did ya come up with this one, ice cold ! And I think you're rite abot that and life just plays along, ty al |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/24/2004 |
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(((regis)))
tres magnifique! merci, mon ami (((HUGS))) et amour, karla. :)
that is basically the extent of my french...in other words, I LOVE IT |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/24/2004 |
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Excellet Regis!!
Thanks for the nice review.....made me smile!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
2/24/2004 |
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Well penned Regis...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader) |
2/24/2004 |
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| Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell |
2/24/2004 |
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True....in fact you could say the same thing substituting the word "illusions" for "delusions"...! This is very insightful Regis. An interesting photograph as well.........
Pam |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/24/2004 |
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| Great Haiku |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/24/2004 |
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So true, Regis! Very good haiku and lovely photo! Enjoyed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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