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illusions (haiku)
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illusions...

one cannot see that
which is hid behind the scenes
of one's illusions


 


Copyright  Regis Auffray
February 2004
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Reviewed by lois christensen
True- I don't even know what's beyond my illusions.
Reviewed by Lori Moore
I like Haiku, and to me, this is a beauty.
Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
love the photo and the haiku
Reviewed by john zimmerman
this is a good write...

is it a haiku? See my articles "my poetics [#'s 2&8]"

john+
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Great pic. Technically, haiku should not be titled. That is for poems. If you insist on the 5-7-5, you should insist on that too.

one cannot see that
which is hid behind the scenes
of one's illusions

haiku are not supposed to be commentaries on life, they are supposed to be small gems of perfection which show, not tell. They also are supposed to deal with some aspect of nature. This is a nice short poem, but it is not a haiku, at least in my opinion. The sentiments, are, of curse, meritorious. Nice poem.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
So true, Regis, because we dare not touch our illusions in case they fade on us - like the stuff of waking dreams. We live protecting our desired fog and smoke screens! Beautifully expressed KB
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
nice!
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
I'm starting to like these haikus...truth simply expressed. Most effective.

Gina
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Whew! you said it with few words but very profound too.I don't know whatHAIKU means but you must deeply understand it.I have heard writting down our dreams can give us a clue to the meaning of our lives.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Regis....splendid Haiku....deep and profound...love n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
yay!
Reviewed by evan horetsky
very beautiful haiku, and i just love the picture.
Evan
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
This was sharp, and short, and straight to the point.
Very well put, my friend.

Evelyn.
Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
profound!
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com
Said it well. . . and one can always see what is beyond the doubts of others thru their dreams.

bless you Reg/is

cynth'ya
Reviewed by Dale Clark
How true! Very nice.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Lovely, Regis! And oh, so true.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
True....yet we all do it..great haiku...nice writing Regis..floria
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Very insightful, Regis, as all your work is. Sometimes our illusions are blind to the possibilities, and they become random, instead of focused.

Carmen
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
Oh, but I do like this one... and the graphic is fitting as well. This is definatly a keeper!

(((hugs)))

♫ Jackie
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Yes i agree
with all here
out cold!!!
love the picture
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Exceptional. Inspired write.
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
it takes a true poet to see even the scenes of an illusion, much less what is hidden there....great thought, my friend.
Reviewed by jude forese
a haiku of philosophical excellence! no illusions behind this poem ...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Profound in image and words!
Reviewed by Nancy D.
"Awesome"

Nancy
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Be nice if we could?
fantastic haiku
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Regis this is brilliant, and the art is wonderful, great combo!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Excellent and outstanding thought, I loved this,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Wow Reg, where did ya come up with this one, ice cold ! And I think you're rite abot that and life just plays along, ty al
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((regis)))

tres magnifique! merci, mon ami (((HUGS))) et amour, karla. :)

that is basically the extent of my french...in other words, I LOVE IT
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Excellet Regis!!

Thanks for the nice review.....made me smile!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Well penned Regis...


Trixie :)
Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
True....in fact you could say the same thing substituting the word "illusions" for "delusions"...! This is very insightful Regis. An interesting photograph as well.........

Pam
Reviewed by George Carroll
Great Haiku
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
So true, Regis! Very good haiku and lovely photo! Enjoyed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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