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Linda M Hill

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Calming Waters
by Linda M Hill

Tuesday, March 02, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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She applies her makeup
With an elegant air
Combs until it shines
Her short blond hair
The latest fashion
Graces her demure frame
The clothes in her closet
Bear all the brand names

She smiles at the neighbors
As she locks her front door
Just like she's done
A thousand times before
She climbs in her car
The finest Roll's around
Such a beautiful lady
Whispers the whole town

She stops at a river
How peaceful it seems
She takes off her shoes
And abandons her dreams
She walks the last mile
The river claims her life
Such a beautiful lady
The most perfect wife

Linda Hill 2004

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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/5/2004
Blew me away, explodes with understated emotion.
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre 3/4/2004
Holy Moly... This is excellent writing Dear... Suprising but altogether possible... It's a sad way to go through life, but sometimes things run deeper... ;) Thanks for the comments on my site as well, I appreciate it!

Rodd
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/4/2004
This is a wonderful free flowing write.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 3/3/2004
You are so incredible.
This sifts right through the facades worn by so many.
We all need each other.
We certainly need you.
John
Reviewed by jude forese 3/2/2004
flows effortlessly ...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 3/2/2004
Most Excellent_

What Suicide Means Is: YOU ARE GOING TO HAVE TO COME BACK AN DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN!

TRASK
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 3/2/2004
Beautiful Linda, this is so true in many an instance...money cant buy you happiness...a truly wonderful write
Allen
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 3/2/2004
A beautiful poem with a chilling end showing the fact that even wealth cannot spare you the throes of apathy and depression
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/2/2004
Linad This one is excellent!
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/2/2004
What leads a mind to the final end is not always decernable. Very well conceived and written piece that happens almost every day.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/2/2004
Ah, yeah, I felt that I knew where the poem was going but I wasn't ready for the ending anyway, it was so . . . as-matter-of-fact. Good job.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/2/2004
Oh this is so heartfelt Linda....sad...
so well done ....floria
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 3/2/2004
This is a winner, Linda! BRILLIANT construction and depth...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/2/2004
Well written Linda!!

love tinka
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 3/2/2004
Very creative sad piece Linda and it fits quite a few. It's just kept under the covers. Love and luck G.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/2/2004
oh, what a very sad ending! but a very good poem; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(



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