|Reviewed by Michael Kersting
|I agree with you..without hope all is lost!|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Excellent, excellent, writing!...
All I wanted was you my friend,
But you are never there…
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|sometimes, at all times perhaps, you've got to let these feelings go...let them out into the light of day for examination and contemplation...and then, move on into what is promised to us all...for god is, truly, love...a wonderful, thoughtful write, poet.|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|The pain is evident and real.
I am so sorry. One must always have
hope, that is what keeps me going!
You got to have FAITH!
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|The pain and sorrow in this write is so evident. Excellent write|
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Speechless. Didn't think it possible, but there it is. You nocked me speechless.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I feel this write of yours, Retta. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
|The fifth verse really hit me -- I've ruminated on that a bunch. Wonderful poetry!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Very powerful and emotive, Retta.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|pwerful and good Reatta, nothing wrong with a little selfishness. love and peace G|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Powerful, indeed. Well done, Retta.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful write. You are right...we all need hope to make it through each day.|
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|Powerfully written with a ton of emotion, Retta.
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Great poem. Your web page is awesome as well.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|You Cannot Hope, Wish Nor Pray_
But,You Alone Can Make It A Better Today, Hopefully Make A Better Tomorrow (Will) Come!
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|You must have been reading my mind - I know where you're coming from...greatly enjoyed your write!|
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|Good stuff, as usual, with powerful emotions.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|We can become our own tourturers, but life's to short not to grab it by the throat, don't hope for a better tomorrow, instead go for a better today..|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful ans staight from the heart Retta!!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Lots of searching through the pain in this one Retta..very well expressed. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Great write. I really love the ending.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I know this feeling so well they are never there, you express it to perfection Reindeer!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Sometimes we have to find new friends...
Excellent out cry for the friend......
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A strong write from the heart|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Hope, and spiritual is what we need to lean on. You're right, friends sometimes will fail us. On the other hand: friends don't fail us. Those who do, aren't true friends.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Great write Reindeer, I been gone too long!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|unfortunately, friendship an be one-sided and ill-fated ...
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|very touchng Reindeer, I could feel the tender anguish in this one, and also the feel of a friend vacant, ty al|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|I know the feeling Belle...it's like you are always
there for someone and then when you need them...they
are not there...this is very sad...powerfull...and
a beautiful write...floria
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|This is a profound poem..a dark seething brooding is there in few lines...Masterful as always, Kudos!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|So much truth you have expressed in this, great write Retta.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great capture of the feeling of the loss hope.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Shed enough tears and it will be the basis for a life-giving force for a new friend to grow.|