|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|Katy, I would have to call this
an UNVALENTINE. But its great as always.
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Wow, Katydid. This is probably the strongest thing I've seen you write. In fact, it's so strong, I think it may have been inspired by true life events. I know you'll stay strong, but I hope everything is all right with you.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Auch!! Stingy indeed Katy!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Great poem with great form and stunning conclusion that you build up to, this is so real..|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful capture Katy, it happens just like that too!Excellent perspective...|
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|OUCH! This one stings.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|WOW Katie...what a punch at the end...Knock out writing...
It just flowed so smooth and then POW.....great writing..
You tell it like it is....love the sarcasm at the end...
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Packed with punch, and protected by poetry...
that is the artist's viewpoint to a "T." You've
done well in this one, as in others I've read
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|A quick toss in the sack, that is how it goes I am afraid, find someone better, younger, richer, sexier, etc, etc...Screw people like that, excellent reversal here Katy, Peace thru Laughter, Ed & rufuz|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this Katy, very strong and to the point, outstanding!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Wow, Katy, what a switcheroo.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wow what an ending to a terse poetic write|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Nothing like the direct approach, Katy, in an indirect way, that is. You chose your words well.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Katy, we protect our hearts from hurt. This is what I see here. Protection. Elimanating pain. Striking first. It's odd how we learn to ward off the bad. Only by doing that, we have to be careful not to banish the good as well. Very well expressed Katy! Lisa|