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Wednesday, March 03, 2004
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I thy elf
lowe I see
my mischief
would cause
much harm to thee

better safe this
elf to play
upon barren lap
in river word verse
use becomes sound

fuel indifference
though drawing anguish
whispers warden weight
thy side aches while lesson wise

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Reviewed by E. Richardson
I often refer to myself, half jokingly, as a neodruid, which is why the title of this piece caught my eye. I found this piece interesting on several levels. In structure it appears to be a literal translation from Old High English...its voice or rhythm is akin to that as well. The imagery is strong but subtle...and it has layers. While it seems to be speaking of the wee people, methinks it goes a bit beyond that...all in all, this is a splendid write, Debby
Reviewed by Kenny Baez
oh, i can feel the elf breeze in this one, debby!
Reviewed by Debra Conklin
I read this three times, Deb, but I'm sorry, I'm not real sure what it means, but I do like the flow and the images your words bring to mind.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Outstanding Debby!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
WONDERFUL write...I can understand why you used old English at times...
Reviewed by john zimmerman
this is a strange poem,

it makes no "sense"

yet hints at great wisdom:

but its sound
its sound is glorious!

nicely done

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