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The Tally
by A PAX

Friday, March 05, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The Tally

Sword of war, gripped by the hand
Fierce battle winds....turn all the sand
That tumble down by smallest grain
To tally death .....and human pain

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 3/9/2004
i wonder who is keeping the tally...hmmm...very nice imagery in this piece, i could see it all...and feel it as well...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/9/2004
Oh wow..yes very powerful, excellently written!

Reindeer
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/8/2004
This is so very POWERFUL!
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/8/2004
Much said in a few powerful words. Bill
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 3/7/2004
and the hand that gripped the sword of war
the winds that howled through sands of straw
that slipped before they tumbled down
will find themselves... with the wind of frown...

Superb, i love this i truly do, to me this is awesome, i'd run amok on these words, i just wish i had the chance to take this where i'd love to take it...i dont know, but i'd get a buzz on the journey...take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/7/2004
Very powerful in a few words...
nice Anita...floria
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 3/6/2004
So much said in so few words. Wonderful job my friend!!

Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/6/2004
Superb write Anita! Captured the moment!
Reviewed by Dale Clark 3/5/2004
Powerful and profound!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/5/2004
Profound, Anita.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/5/2004
Deep.......very deep Anita!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 3/5/2004
hard images Lady A, as if they all are counted, ty al
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 3/5/2004
Concise and deep!
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa 3/5/2004
Great depth in few words. Thanks.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/5/2004
Lady A~
Powerful poem.......

Lady Peg



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