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|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Ah, the ever-illusive Paradise. I'm nodding at your expression of the truth. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes being lost is worth your way back ...|
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|Had to backtrack and think again on this one, Doug - I think I totally missed the point! First focus was 'place', but no! - it's person and what a beautiful twist!
A unique and exceptionally well written piece of work!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Without ever having seen it, experienced it, we poets scramble to outdo each other with finding the 'definitive' delivery
of what Paradise is... Ive read many.. THIS may just be the most unique, so far. You have cleverly taken the ultimate joy, Paradise,
and written it with a decidedly negative twist. That's interesting writing. katy.