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Mr.W
by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Saturday, March 06, 2004
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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This is a poem about a certain man I have become friends with over the years when I was living in the state of Missouri. He is a good man. Something happened that I do not think I can forgive myself of but I am hoping he can forgive me. I have expressed it in this poem.
The wife and I became friends and therefore she told me what was going on with her.

Lost in Love,
The Two Souls
are now, One.
The Children are
born, and the
passion continues.

Along the way
of growing up
of children,
Suddenly She ,
your wife, blanked
out and became
fearful.
She was afraid and ill.


She latched on to
a dangerous man
and I did not STOP IT!

I hope you can
Forgive me.

Written March 2nd,2004 4:30pm
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Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/14/2004
This was sad and emotional. Well-expressed.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reviewed by Debra Conklin 3/12/2004
Your guilt over this, is real, but needs to be put aside. People live their own lives, despite how we may feel about things. It's time to put this behind you and move ahead.
Debbie
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 3/9/2004
:( of necessity, cryptic, yet clear as day. a neccesary write, poet.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/9/2004
This was so sad Becca,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 3/7/2004
Deep, Becca. But you can't blame yourself. You did what you could. Sometimes we make the right choose others the wrong ones -- all we can do is be there to laugh, cry, to love, support, and be a friend.
"Man must choose his own destiny, no one can choose it for him._ -- Princess Leia, Star Wars
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/7/2004
So sad this one Becca.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/7/2004
Very sad and touching...perhaps
you wouldn't have been able to
stop her from what she was doing..
floria
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 3/7/2004
Becca, I don't see were you did anything wrong to seek forgiveness for.

Best wishes
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/7/2004
Yes this is intence, keep on keeping on...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/6/2004
Honest expression that elicits thinking from your reader. Thank you for this offering, Becca. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 3/6/2004
Wow! That is intense, really leaves images in one's mind. Sorry I have yet to email you back, I haven't been on much in ages, but I will write you soon because your email was really great:)



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