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The Name on the Wall
By Mary Ellen Quire
Last edited: Sunday, November 18, 2007
Posted: Sunday, July 15, 2007
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I stopped. Heart pounding in my chest. Lungs burning like a fire set deep inside them.
Don’t stop. Don’t stop. Run.
My feet wouldn’t obey. A shiver crept up my spine like a spider tickling my senses with its many tiny legs. It was the name on the old brick wall, my name, that scared me more than anything. Anna. Thick red letters about a foot tall shown in the security light of the alley. My hand shook as I touched the cold, wet A. The viscous substance coated my fingertip, its metallic smell leaving its mark on my taste buds without ever touching my tongue. My stomach retched. Blood. Swiping my hand across the denim of my jeans, I felt it dampen my skin underneath and I wanted to scream.
I caught a glimpse of the abandoned car I’d left at the end of the alley. The Escort was useless now. Out of gas and of life, it sat there helplessly, unable to give me what I needed most, to get the hell out of here. I gripped the handle to the snubbed nosed revolver tighter. It weighed a little heavier in my hand.
“You are mine, Anna.”
A dark figure came out of the shadows from the other side of the alley. I wanted to run but thought better of it as I felt the mark on my neck burn like someone was pressing a lit cigarette onto my skin. “Please. You can’t make me do this.”
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| Reviewed by Cleve Sylcox |
7/15/2007 |
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| Great story.....Keep up the wonderful work. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
7/15/2007 |
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Enjoyed this much...I wasn't sure what the angle was or the plot at the beginning, but that's one thing that peeked my curiosity...the more I read, the more I wanted to know who is this person, what are they doing and why? I continued over to the sight and read captivated to the final word! Waiting now on the conclusion or continuing saga! Very well written my friend, you've penned an exciting chapter in what could be a great novel...keep em coming! Bravo!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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