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Marvelous Christmasin the City
By Deep Rajvansh
Wednesday, December 16, 2009

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This is marvelous Christmas in the city because a very surprising snow-fall was going on that night. Snow was falling with golden leaves of Christmas tree.........



 Marvelous Chirstmas in the City...........
This world is full of mysteries. So many mysteries are still unsolved. A group of six children has to meet with noble and evil ghosts during their boat race and they have received magic gifts from the noble ghosts and a magic mantra from evil ghosts.
In this group there were 4 boys named Krolin Cooper 11, Graham 13, Right Allen 13, Mat William 7 and two girls Kate 11 and Marry 10 years old. All the children got magic gifts as Krolin got a magic stick to go any where and call the ghosts. The stick has many more qualities insides.
Graham got a wonder ball which can be operated only by Graham. They can see and go into past, present and future with the help of Wonder ball. Right got a magic blue pencil of which he can reach and got anything to write only on black surface. Mat has a power of meditation; he can see the trouble or any thing of future with his meditation. Kate gat a paras [Philosophers stone] she can convert anything of iron into gold by touching the paras and Marry got a pearl chain to which she is able to understand, hear and talk to the animals, birds, trees and all creatures of the world. This make their life changed.
                   Group was satisfied, to make people happy with the help of gifts given by Ghosts and they were doing justice with the things.           
 It was Christmas time; by first week of Dec. they start to make plans to celebrate Christmas. Every one has his own idea. Having every one’s choice they begin to collect so many gifts by writing with blue pencil for the needy ones. Before a couple of week they start to distribute the gifts by hiding them selves.
                 One day Kate said to express her suspect; “We are collecting so many gifts to distribute them with a great excitement but from where these gifts are coming? The owner of these things will be getting loss.” Graham gave an idea, “We should have to see in the wonder ball for the clarification of her doubt.”                                        
                  As well as they saw in the wonder ball, things were coming to fly in gift rapping by writing on the black paper. Group came to know that all gifts were coming from different sources; most of them were coming from shops, where shop-keepers and their servants were trying to catch them but items were going away from the shop by flying too fast. They were filled with a great surprise, because they were unable to control of going items.                        
        Group said; “Oh! No………..we are doing wrong. We are making unhappy by giving a great loss to another one for some one’s help. Marry said’ “we didn’t think about it before Right & Krolin said them;” if we are doing wrong, our marks will be cutting. Graham, let us see in the Wonder Ball about our marks.”                                          
                Graham saw into the wonder ball that their marks became less then before, their happiness turned into sadness. They were worried about their marks as well as kind acts. What should they do to increase their marks? Suddenly Kate gave an idea’, “We can fulfill the loss of the owners of things which we had brought up from different sources with the help of Pares Stone. Cupper asked; “But how?”             
Kate touched an iron cattle stand with Pares Stone it turned into golden. She said,” we will return it to then who had already lost their things by making gold with useless iron thing. They will be glad to get much gold in place of their lost items.         
                  “No problem! Start to make gold heaving touch the Pares Stone to iron items’ we should return back to them as soon as possible.”            
                Kate was touching the stone to the iron items as pen stand, chair, frying pan, door handles and so many useless items. They began to return the things to write on slips, “This is your payment of lost item.”
Graham told with laughing;                       
People will be surprise to receiving their payments in shape of golden door handle, frying pan, broken handle of cycle or a chair.” Kateansweredwithfun, “What can I do, Iam making gold only the iron items already kept in this room.”                          
               Right suggested; “I should write with blue pencil,” Don’t show the gold items in the way to other people except the shop keeper.” Group accepts the idea and he done it.                        
                 On the other side shop keepers were surprising to see the golden things with a massage. Every one was happy to get more then, its actual price. They were giving an order to the servants,” don’t close the shops even at night because now it is becoming profitable for us”. They were getting gold in place of their items.
 It was become headlines for every news channel and news paper. Headings were very attractive with interesting detailed news. One of them was;              
“Payment of disappeared items is coming back into gold from an invisible power, but returned items are coming in very interesting shapes like chair, table, frying pan, pen stand, legs of bed, mechanical parts, cycle stand, handles etc.”      
                       As well as people saw the news on their T.V. sets or read in the news paper, they became excited to know about the truth and they were reaching on the shops and Malls. Some people were bagging to god for take away their any thing in place of gold.   
                 Group wanted to celebrate Christmas by fulfilling the desire of Ghost Mr. Neal. Who wanted to distribute the Christmas gifts to needy ones in the get up of Santa Clause? With the help of blue pencil, being his uncertain death his desire was remaining incomplete.             
                 Having to do this noble cause in their mind, Graham was ready in Santa Clause getup, and went to hospitals with his friends. Santa was giving the gifts to patients and Krolin was touching his stick with carefully by hiding from the patients. Patients were happy to getting their gifts. When the children had gone from the hospital all patients were feeling too much improvement in their condition.                   
                Now children went to the old age homes, Orphanage and the poor people to give those gifts on the occasion of Christmas. By doing this noble cause all were very happy because they have not done any work in their life for their own satisfaction. This act was giving them lots of fun, happiness and financial support to the people.                               
                 At night Right has demanded some beautifully decorated Christmas trees, to write with blue pencil. They have to send those trees to the selected places as hospitals, old age homes, colonies of poor and orphanage with sweets, cakes, cookies, dry fruits and other gifts.         
 That night was very special for all. No body wants to sit in the home, because a very surprising snow-fall was going on that night. Snow was falling with golden leaves of Christmas tree. By watching this marvelous snow fall everyone was giving thanks to God for his kindness to all of them.              
                  As well as media got the news of snow fall with golden leaves they come out with their cameras to cover up the reality of the news. People were sharing their views with each other. No one wants to go home; all were busy to collect leaves as much as possible. Wealth was raining for them. One thing which was very common in all topics that, “it was definitely a magical gift from God for all of us.”                    
                  Some of them have different views, according to them. These golden leaves will be change into green fresh leaves till the morning.                                        
               Next morning there was rumors about last night’s incident. The main head lines of the news papers and T.V. channels was the last night’s incident. There was news attached with this incident about the patients who were recovered last day. People were feeling a change in them-selves.    By getting wealth in shape of golden leaves and by recovering their critical deceases people were forgetting their differences with each other. Softness was come in their nature with in a day.        
Families of Krolin Group were also happy by getting so many gifts from their children. They were giving too much blessings to the children.    

 Note: To read so mant mystries of the World purchase my first published fiction for teens "Krolin Group in the Mysteries World" This story is a part of that book. Your comments are too important for me.









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