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| Reviewed by lawrence bear |
9/28/2009 |
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| This is nice story, i liked it. cute for kids, thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
8/24/2009 |
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| I really enjoyed the story.. Sun beams can brighten many a day. Its perfect for all ages!....M |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
7/21/2009 |
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What a lovely story! Great write
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Nichols-Ehlert |
1/25/2009 |
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| I love it mom! It's so fun! |
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| Reviewed by william sawyers |
1/31/2006 |
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I loved it, great job.
From California |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
12/8/2005 |
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| An enjoyable read. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente |
5/18/2005 |
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Lovely story Carolyn.
I enjoyed the read.
Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
2/8/2004 |
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| My younger sister would love this one -- I am going to pass this along to my parents because my sister is at the right age where she would appreciate this. She is at a specialized elementary school which specializes in writing. She is not quite ready for what I do, though I have this feeling she would fall into the family genre soon enough. This is a good poem, impressive is the word I am looking for here. Quite epic in its telling. I have to agree with everyone on here when I say you definately have a voice when it comes to writing -- and to write in an epic form, that is a craft in itself. |
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| Reviewed by Judith Bailey |
1/7/2004 |
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| You do have a Voice, Carolyn. Please keep writing what it speaks, when it speaks. I think many of us need to hear it more often. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Brooks |
8/1/2003 |
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| Lovely story in poetic form, and a bit of fun too, it kind of reminds me of the on-off visits of sunshine to our English shores. Winter-summer-winter-summer etc., all in one week! Jackie <> < |
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| Reviewed by Julia Mendels (Reader) |
7/20/2003 |
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| Lovely! Refreshing to read happy, lighthearted work. Thank you for reviewing my article re reconciliation. |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
7/1/2003 |
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Bear,
what a beautiful write..!! Thanks for sharing..!
Love and light,
Dove |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
5/29/2003 |
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| I really liked this Carolyn. Sunbeam good it seem. GEM |
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| Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister |
5/27/2003 |
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A beautiful story, I enjoyed it very much.
keep writting
Mister |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
5/25/2003 |
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Hi, Bear! Delightful write! We all have heard tales about the "Man in the Moon" but few ever personify the sun, as you have done.
After reading 'bout your playful lil imp, my mind took a giant leap to the Aurora Borealis!!! Punched it into search, and Voila! I LEARNED something new!
Thought you might appreciate it also, here is the link:
http://virtual.finland.fi/finfo/english/aurora_borealis.html
I had read other info from US and Canadian sources, but this one is from Finland. Enjoy ! Tom. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/14/2003 |
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| beautifully told! i enjoyed this very, very much! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. look at the northern lights for me...i'd love to see them! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/14/2003 |
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| beautiful story, carolyn! enjoyed this very much! thanks for sharing! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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