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A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder
By Donni-Jay De-Ville
Last edited: Tuesday, September 04, 2007
Posted: Friday, January 28, 2005
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This story seems implausible, but it will make sense and there is a HUGE twist at the end. It is midly erotic with no crudity.
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
11/7/2006 |
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midly-erotic? It bursts of erotic...
Great write Donni-Jay. Love the story. And your photo even more. Unbelievable - the way you look. Brings back some sort of hope that life is not over once you have crossed the magic 40 !
Hope you are doing well. Haven't been around alot lately - too much work and stress. But will try to read again regularly - especially your work.
Love
Amira |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
8/19/2005 |
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| lol love the ending! great writing, nice style! |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/28/2005 |
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| Okay this was very interesting and erotic and by the way my husband says that you would make a good Wonder Woman. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/28/2005 |
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Great write Donni...you look great in that "Outfit" wow!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/28/2005 |
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great write, and nice picture, donni-jay! very well done!
(((HUGS))) adn much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :) |
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