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In
By Lisa Adams
Last edited: Friday, August 15, 2008
Posted: Friday, August 15, 2008

This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

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Enter

I want you in my space;
I want you to intrude into my thoughts,
even in a crowded room
so I am alone with you;

I want you in my heart
so when you feel alone
you can dream of me
or pick up the phone
and I will come;

I want you in my life
to be alone
with you
for a long, long time.

I want you in
my soul
so no matter where I am
I am not alone
and you,
not lonely...ever.

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Reviewed by Liz Cosline 12/28/2008

Very nicely said

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler 8/17/2008

This one tells it all...Great job!

Reviewed by Jean Pike 8/16/2008

stellar!

Reviewed by Linda Law 8/16/2008

This is such a gentle, honest, open way of expression. Lovely on paper LIsa, good work. lindalaw

Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/16/2008

I love the simple yet so openly honest expressions of love, trust and desire in this one Lisa. When we fall in love this is the way it should be...wanting but not possessing.
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