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Fingertips
By Lisa Adams
Last edited: Friday, September 18, 2009
Posted: Friday, September 18, 2009
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Softly weave
Fingertips brush
across the tops of violets
as we sit cross-legged
atop the hill
Sun soaks into my clothing
warming me
as the essence of lillies of the valley
drift toward you on the cooling breezes
You sigh
your fingertips skim
the top of my hand
sending a shiver up my spine
While the fingertips
of your other hand
push my hair off my neck
and your lips take their place
Soon my back is pressed against the welcoming earth
a bed of tall grasses
I smell the spring
though it is closer to autumn
You are on top of me now
water eyes searching my own
tongues entwined
fingertips dancing
across flesh
sublime
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| Reviewed by Debra Conklin |
9/23/2009 |
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| This is such a tender and loving piece. Nice job. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/19/2009 |
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Lisa love your new profile picture and love the tender yet spicy feel of this new poem, you do romance so lovingly and with such feeling...enjoyed...
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