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Death Without Closure
By Helen C. Downey
Last edited: Friday, September 23, 2005
Posted: Saturday, August 06, 2005
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Here are a few chapters to wet your whistle! I'll add more later.
Death without Closure
Chapter One
THIS STORY IS BEING REVISED>
THANK YOU
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Anon (Reader) |
7/2/2006 |
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| This is the first story I chose to look at ... I'll add you to my tracking list so that I can be updated. I was reading your blog and saw that you were feeling down because people didn't leave comments. Sometimes that's because they have time to read, but not enough time to formulate a review or comment. Sometimes people can't be bothered. Some people might be worried about offending. There are all sorts of reasons. I'll check out one of your other offerings. Take care of yourself *smiles* |
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| Reviewed by Harold Hester |
8/11/2005 |
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| Good morning Helen... Please consider rewriting these five "chapters" before, "...wetting our whistle with more." I was all but turned off on this story at your second sentence. Harold |
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