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Love!
By SOULFUL SHEE M. G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS
Last edited: Tuesday, August 28, 2007
Posted: Monday, July 23, 2007
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

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Love is a feeling in your heart...
that starts...

This is not MY Story - but a True Story!    

 

 (( KARMA)) I do believe with all my heart happens...

 

  *I've seen this before but when this "article" gravitated into my direction

    again, I knew I had to share it!!! I am So HAPPY!

 

* ~ * READ this SLowwww! YOU won't want to miss this * ~ *

 

Chain Of Love

by William

He almost didn't see the old lady, stranded on the side of the road, but even in the dim light of day, he could see she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her Mercedes and got out. His Pontiac was still sputtering when he approached her. Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her? He didn't look safe; he looked poor and hungry....

He almost didn't see the old lady, stranded on the side of the road, but even in the dim light of day, he could see she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her Mercedes and got out. His Pontiac was still sputtering when he approached her.

Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her? He didn't look safe; he looked poor and hungry.

He could see that she was frightened, standing out there in the cold. He knew how she felt. It was that chill which only fear can put in you.

He said, "I'm here to help you, ma'am. Why don't you wait in the car where it's warm? By the way, my name is Bryan Anderson."

Well, all she had was a flat tire, but for an old lady, that was bad enough.

Bryan crawled under the car looking for a place to put the jack, skinning his knuckles a time or two. Soon he was able to change the tire. But he had to get dirty and his hands hurt.

As he was tightening up the lug nuts, she rolled down the window and began to talk to him. She told him that she was from St. Louis and was only just passing through. She couldn't thank him enough for coming to her aid.

Bryan just smiled as he closed her trunk. The lady asked how much she owed him. Any amount would have been all right with her. She already imagined all the awful things that could have happened had he not stopped. Bryan never thought twice about being paid. This was not a job to him. This was helping someone in need, and God knows there were plenty who had given him a hand in the past. He had lived his whole life that way, and it never occurred to him to act any other way.

He told her that if she really wanted to pay him back, the next time she saw someone who needed help, she could give that person the assistance they needed, and Bryan added, "And think of me."

He waited until she started her car and drove off. It had been a cold and depressing day, but he felt good as he headed for home, disappearing into the twilight.

A few miles down the road the lady saw a small cafe. She went in to grab a bite to eat, and take the chill off before she made the last leg of her trip home. It was a dingy looking restaurant. Outside were two old gas pumps.

The whole scene was unfamiliar to her. The waitress came over and brought a clean towel to wipe her wet hair. She had a sweet smile, one that even being on her feet for the whole day couldn't erase. The lady noticed the waitress was nearly eight months pregnant, but she never let the strain and aches change her attitude. The old lady wondered how someone who had so little could be so giving to a stranger. Then she remembered Bryan After the lady finished her meal, she paid with a hundred dollar bill.

The waitress quickly went to get change for her hundred dollar bill, but the old lady had slipped right out the door. She was gone by the time the waitress came back. The waitress wondered where the lady could be. Then she noticed something written on the napkin. There were tears in her eyes when she read what the lady wrote: "You don't owe me anything. I have been there too.

Somebody once helped me out, the way I'm helping you. If you really want to pay me back, here is what you do: Do not let this chain of love end with you."

Under the napkin were four more 0 bills.

Well, there were tables to clear, sugar bowls to fill, and people to serve, but the waitress made it through another day. That night when she got home from work and climbed into bed, she was thinking about the money and what the lady had written. How could the lady have known how much she and her husband needed it? With the baby due next month, it was going to be hard.

She knew how worried her husband was, and as he lay sleeping next to her, she gave him a soft kiss and whispered soft and low, "Everything's gonna be all right. I love you, Bryan Anderson."


  

*This story still brings tears to my eyes!

 

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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 9/9/2008
How very true that what you give will come back to you.A lovely story

hugs
Kathy
Reviewed by Sue Phillips 9/3/2008
Clay Walker sang a song from this story.
Reviewed by Stuart McCallum 8/10/2008
Oh Shee,
I have read many touching stories which have brought tears to my eyes -- this is indeed one of them. I am welled up as I type!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
Stuart
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 6/5/2008

Sheila this was a touching story, regardless who wrote it. Seems the more we give or help the more blessings we receive in return.

Thank you for sharing this narrative and continued blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar 3/23/2008
Yes. That's all I can really say. Yes, it's perfect.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 2/15/2008
I believe the blessings ALWAYS come full circle! Thanks for sharing!

Cryssa
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 12/27/2007
Tis story brought tears in my eyes, Shee. We have become so selfish nowadays that we forget to look at the next person. I needed this - thank you so much for sharing.

Merry Christmas and God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Sheila Hendrix 11/16/2007
I really enjoyed the story Shee. I can tell that you love to write and you do it well. I was kind of down today and your story made me feel better. Can't wait to read more by you. Thanks so much for sharing.

Sheila Hendrix
Reviewed by Art Sun 9/23/2007
A very thoughtfull piece...the world works within a circle, no end no beginning, only a repetition of those who can see the need to assist those who are in need, it all works out in the cycle of life...

Karma is one of those never ending circles...


nice .....




Art Sun...
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 9/16/2007
What a beautiful and inspiring story, It sent goose bumps all over me
Reviewed by Vickie Yannuzzi 8/21/2007
There are always moments to help, others, sometimes we fail to reconize the need, they are often times in our own family..
Reviewed by Mary Coe 8/16/2007
Excellent write. I believe that one of the reasons that we are here is to help one another. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing
Reviewed by Keith Rowley 8/10/2007
A moving, simple story told at the right pace. Not too long or short. Touching and sincere.

Keith
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 8/9/2007
You know what you're talking about Shee, You sure do, wouldn't the world be a great place, thanks for this wonderful story , Love,
Reviewed by H Cruz 7/25/2007
Sweet, G. Not long ago I had the intense desire to make amends with a boil from my childhood that was about to burst. You see when I was about eight my family was in a bad way and it had been several days since I had eaten, (something I love to do) My hunger got the better of me so I went to the grocery store and asked people if I could cary their bags for them for a dime. after several hours I have little to show for my efforts and became depressed just before an elderly lady offered me a quarter if I would carry them to her house; I agreed, the aroma of the food had me hypnotized, just as she openned her door I ran away with her food and consumed it like an animal, only to get the dry heave's for the next twenty minutes.
I never lived down that event and often wondered what hardship I might have bestowed on thid old woman, who probably lived on S.S.
Anyway after scouting out a parking lot in a less than desierable neighborhood for what seemed like an eternity, I finally saw my shot at redemtion. An old woman with a two wheeled cart arived in clothing befit for a bridge dweller. I waited at the front of the store to make my move. As She got in line I pulled the checkout girl to the side and handed her a hundred dollar bill with instructions to pay for the ladies groceries and hand her the change, reffusing to take no for an answere. Of course I remained annonymouse, Since that day I no longer think of my starving escapade.
J.C.
Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. 7/24/2007
I believe that the chaining of Love and Kindness is a Karmic reality. I have read the Story 3 times and counting. Thank you and more Blessings to you Sheee.

Sincerely,
Regino
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 7/24/2007
Shee, this mystical thing is real, Call it "reap what you sow"
or Karma....both the same..

Walt
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/24/2007
"A good turn deserves another" and the Lord works in mysterious ways.
A great story, and one for clicking the Save star above.
Georg
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/23/2007
Very good Shee. What goes around comes around.
hugs
Fee

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