Sage Sweetwater Firebrand, sensual story of new erotic discovery, ancient roots, and replacing the notion of felling a tree with bringing down orgasm in nature's most available Light with a powerful environmental delivery of message "save a tree, fell an orgasm"...(photo roots of ancient silk cotton trees of the temples of Angkor at Ta Prohm.)
she lets her
come out in the wilderness
under the spell of the mushroom,
silk from her ancient
weaving loom, taking me
all in, tutelage from the damp
toadstool, the wisdom rehydrated
after being frozen for centuries of capped
restraint, why an ancient civilization collapsed,
she slides her finger up and down to reveal a conclusion,
swelling of the pink rhododendron, it's no illusion, save a tree,
fell an orgasm,
ahead on the
forepeak, away from
her easel temporarily,
it is now do we hear her
speak "logger put on your
hardhat, I am about to fall so
hard!" the maples running their
sap, she's intoxicated on fermented
fruits of her self-labor,
wine sweetens her curious
lips, another woman's Pussy to
fuck, fells her to her knees, she
prays for it, coming under nature's
ultra-violet lamp, horses tied back at
the camp, woodland so thick, the darkness
lit by a light hole of salvation in the canopy of
ecology, hives of honey bees, save the trees, it
is now do we hear her speak, "I like what I know,
I dream of a sage so long ago,
to respond to my
ancient roots, my sexual
needs, merging with the jungle,
Angkor Ta Prohm Temple ancient
silk cotton roots, once home to hundreds
of monks, flame-shaped nagas, trusted spirits
to bring rain, I bless my helplessness to stop this
orgasm...My God, it's too late...logger put on your hardhat!"
Copyright 8/4/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|I agree with Jena. This is a very sensually romantic and erotic piece that makes the reader want to interact with the characters. Phew! And the Heck with that stupid hardhat, it just gets in the way. Thank you for sharing dear sister.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Misplaced my hardhat, Sage, but always ready to save a tree, etc.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Mushrooms are so varied and lovely in many ways as is your story, Sage. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|The opening stanza is gorgeous, as is that image - builds up from there into a satisfying climax - undone by the power of your pen, Sage - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|fantastic on so many levels! wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, Sage, and that picture is gorgeous! Very well penned; blessed be!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
|absolutely love this one - took photos of wild shrooms few days ago, mushrooms are ideas - don't know if i mentioned i was going to be a shroom farmer in Brazil?! That was not such a good idea - your poem is full of much better images. Good read Sage x|