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We'll Take Good Care of You: Chapter 6
By Elizabeth A. Price
Last edited: Monday, May 14, 2007
Posted: Monday, May 14, 2007
This short story is rated "PG13" by the Author.

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Kate gets off work, and the 6-year-old twins are introduced.

Chapter Six

 

 

 

 

Wednesday 7:15 a.m.

Kate entered her home and sniffed.  Ugh, it was musty smelling.  Mildew.  The late summer rains and humidity had made everything feel soggy.  Fungus loved this weather.  With the thought of endless housework, Kate’s shoulders sagged.

Rob came into the living room his face dark with emotion.  “Do I have a clean uniform?”

Kate sighed.  “Yes. Several are hanging in the laundry room.”

“Can’t you just put the clothes away?  I’m tired of a treasure hunt in the laundry room every morning in order to get dressed.”  Though Rob was in the laundry room, their small ranch house made his mumblings audible.”

“Why don’t you do it the night before and then not worry about it?”  Kate’s face burned.

“Great.  Now I get to do the laundry too.  What else aren’t you going to do around here anymore?”

“I don’t believe you do all of anything around here, so what are you complaining about?  Finding your own clean clothes that you threw on the floor?”

Kate brushed by Rob and said, “We have therapy tonight?”

Rob half out of the door, turned around with clenched teeth and said, “Great.”

Lillian, one of their six-year-old twins, bounced into the kitchen.  Kate grabbed her up for a hug and kiss. 

“Mommy, were you and daddy arguing again?”

“Yeah, we were bad.”

“Oh, mom.”

“Let me get you some breakfast.”  Lillian jumped down and climbed into her chair.  Isabel, the older twin, stumbled into the room, squinting against the light, yawning.

“Hey, sunshine, good morning.”  Kate leaned down, grabbed up Izzy and kissed her.  She then deposited Isabel in her chair.  “What do you two want?”

“Cocoa Pebbles,” Lilly said.

“Is that okay, Izzy?”

Izzy shook her head, yes.

“Okay.”  Ahhh….the mundane chores of life helped keep everything grounded.  Kate smiled to herself, relaxing while she fixed the cereal, juice, and slipped some bacon in a frying pan for the girls.  They would do better with a solid breakfast.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/27/2007
I'm with Sheila regarding Rob. Keep up the good work, Liz. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/20/2007
I really don't like this Rob fella too much! You just cemented my feelings for him in this part, Liz. Great write~ Sheila
Reviewed by Mary Coe 8/30/2007
I love the way you keep the chapters short. I think this one was the shortest. I can see the plot thickens. This is a very interesting hospital drama.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/24/2007
Excellent chapter, Elizabeth; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons 5/23/2007
What a jerk. This guy is really beginning to annoy me. Very nicely done! Elizabeth
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/15/2007
Great little chapter, love the reality and the plot thickens!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Jean Pike 5/14/2007
Short chapter, but it advances the plot nicely, and boy, could I relate! The laundry/housework thing!

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