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Planet Of Success
By Shirley Woods
Last edited: Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Posted: Friday, November 10, 2006
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Boy Oh boy,Earaser Elroy had to erase all his fear away when he ran into Pete a courageous parrot that talks.
Type or Paste your work here... Wow Hi everybody Guess What? The Planeteers and I had visitors from another planet.They landed on the Planet Of Success on the wide spacey area by the school house. They are peculiar looking creatures and also very friendly.They smell like cotton candy. The creatures invited us aboard their spacecraft and it is totally Osom. Bright lights everywhere. Gadget and machines are lined up along the walls of the spacecraft. I call them the "G" people. Glorious gengeniuses. They were sharing some knowledgeable information with us on how Planet Of Success is in a transformation. That is why they are here. They might be the next generation Of............Visitors from
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| Reviewed by Shirley Woods |
7/30/2008 |
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| Guess what? Visitors from another planet landed on Planet Of Success .They are some peculiar looking creatures, but they have a cotton candy smell to them. You know how everything is changing,birds don't sing much anymore,bugs are not crawling on the ground much, Wow everything we know about is slowly disappearing and new things are steadily appearing. Be careful! What you think is It's Not. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
5/23/2008 |
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A bit lost on this one ---Eraser Elroy did a great job, cleared the entire board?
Looking forward to more of your additions Sis Shirley,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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