Become a Fan
By E T Waldron
Thursday, July 01, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Satan's head Saint chooses a bride
Part One and two of six
He came out of a dark stormy sky to hover over me his wingspan like a small plane of shiny sable colored feathers, that though threatening seemed also to protect me. The draft created from his wings as they beat in a steady pattern chilled me, but I was more worried by the thought of what would happen if I made a run for it, suddenly I felt something grip my shoulders, his talons did not hurt there was just a small pressure same as hands would make,but I was in shock as I began to lift off the ground
I cried out "What do you want with me? please let me go" by now we were flying quite high, so I began to pray,the only thing I was capable of at the moment.After a time we reached a place where the mountain had a large ledge, and he lay me down on the ledge then he landed beside me, he was awesome. He had the face and body of a man, dark handsome features, about 7 ft tall, he was in some kind of black silk like covering and the talons he had carried me with, were now feet that he stood on. Then surprisingly out from under his huge wings came a pair of arms he bent over me and lifted me off the ground with his hands under my arms
I felt limp like a rag-doll, and let him move me however he wanted too,then in a firm voice he said "Stand up!" I stiffened and stood up I felt overwhelmed by his presence,then he smiled he was so handsome , but had a wicked smile it frightened me, he laughed when he saw my fear, swooped me up in his armes and kissed me.
I was entranced his eyes so deep like you could see forever in them, I knew he had cast a spell on me I was mesmerized he whispered in my ear, you want me don't you, I couldn't move. Next thing I knew we were flying high and in what seemed like only minutes we were landing on a mass of land like a small island up in the heavens and there was a beautiful gazebo set in a magnificent garden, and it was there he took me and made love to me. I died as was his intention.
When he brought me back to life I too had wings and looked like his twin, but I was still female. He told me he had been watching me for a long time and wanted me as his bride. I thought I was having a nightmare,but he said no he was Satans top saint, and was given a gift to choose whom he wanted from the human race. I got hysterical, and he laughed at me. Then slapped me in the face and made love to me again.
I awoke alone in the garden on the lush grass. As I looked around I realized there was no sound neither bird nor bug, no breeze, all was still and silent,then I thought I must be dead, there was no sign of any life, but how could the grass be so green and the sky so blue. I didn't know what to do.Then a strong voice from nowhere said:"Arise and walk!"It was so forceful, I jumped up and began walking, some force turned me in another direction and I kept going until there was an ocean directly in front of me.
The voice said:"Now Fly!" I was aghast, I had never flown, and said so. The voice shouted: Just flap your wings you foolish mortal." Fear made me try, and to my utter shock and delight I was quickly in flight soaring over the ocean,transfixed by my undulating motion. I had gone quite some way when without any warning I shot into the water like a projectile the force pushing me straight to the bottom. I knew I would drown, wondering what it was all for.
Amonyion Part Two~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I took a deep breath realizing I could breathe under water,I began moving like a fish, not of my own volition, something was propelling me. Coming to a cave I entered continuing until I came to a kind of grotto,where the water was shallow and I had to stand. It was breathtaking, the beauty of stalactites and stalagmites lacy designs like purest crystal and some looking like green and blue glass, others purple and crimson, I was in awe, the water looked like turquoise, the ceiling like diamonds, rubies, and emeralds.
Then a huge Cobra came swimming in,covered in jewels matching the grotto, with a face as large as a humans he swayed in front of me, and said in a strong voice"Now you will learn why humans are the lowest in the hierarchy of creation. The sea is the domain of Lucifer granted to him by Creator as a bounty for having been cast out of heaven. Now as the wife of amonyion Satan's second in command, you must learn all of the Oceans ways, for it is where we are destined by Creator to spend eternity ."
I gasped as I listened to what it said, and I cried out "I belong to Christ not Satan, this is all some terrible mistake, or it's a nightmare!" I started crying hysterically, when I felt something like a charge of electricity shock me! Cobra said "That was my friend the Moray,I asked him to bring you to your senses. Have no fear it was a small jolt and won't harm you. You had better get used to the fact that if Creator did not want Lord Amonyion to have you He would have stopped him." I said recklessly, " Your a serpent full of lies I don't believe you!" He spit out in a blood-curdling voice"And that is your first mistake."
I was crying and ready to scream, I wanted out of there, when Cobra came closer and said in a sing-song chant: "Be still my dear, do not fear, be of good cheer, your love is here" it cast a spell, that I could tell,I was entranced. Then what looked like a giant stingray with the face of Amonyion, reached out arms with hands that grasped me to it and swam with me into a huge grotto where we surfaced and he once again shape-shifted into a man-like figure as I had first seen him, but without the wings.
The grotto had a dock with a few small boats, what looked like a small exploratory sub,and past the dock a large ledge like slate, which led to a giant cave with a huge door that opened at Amonyion's command He led me through a long foyer into a huge room. The room was opulent, like something you'd see in a palace. Walls looked like crystal in various shades of lavender ,purple,green,and blue. The floor like silver with various carpets, woven in unique patterns of color in a material I didn't know, but looked and felt like velvet. I was led by Amonyion to an alcove where a wonderful dining room set that looked like Duncan Phyfe,and had a table, set for two.
Set on a White lace tablecloth was a centerpiece of candelabra and floral arrangement with various orchids,
gardenia's and tiger lilies. There was an array of shrimp, lobster, cheeses ,fruits, breads, crackers, and 3 different wines. I was totally amazed. He held the chair while I sat, then bent over to whisper in my ear,
"Elitha my wife , our first meal together." Taken aback by the name and the rush of arousal that went through me, he said" that is the name I chose for you my sweet, can you wait til we have a bite before we go to the bedroom, or are you ready now."
End Part Two
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|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wow...who'd have guessed you were so talented LOL. Hey you old bat...I hear your time of the year will soon be upon us and image they had the nerve to stick me on a plane the same day the witches and spooks fly....(don't suppose I will be catching you on board.) Anyway, fantastic write...incase I forgot to say that...good job, well done...excellent...OK, enough of the sucking up...catch ya again soon, old gal.
|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|looking forward to the next part...|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|how very creative. the nephilim, the fallen ones, who mated with the daughters of men after the morning star's rebellion...these are forbidden dreams, forbidden stories, but you tell them with passion and a visionary brilliance. i will read the rest with the same sense of wonder and amazement.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|most excellent story, eileen! brava for a super job!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
happy fourth of july to you and yours; may it be full of fun, family, friends, and FIREWORKS! Stay safe, y'all hear??
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead