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A World of Hurt
By Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, December 12, 2007

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Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


Touble came two stepping into town on the heels of  a Texas twister.  Knew it when I saw her:  she was going to cause a world of hurt.

Her raven hair swirled in the wind; her hips, dangerous ... and she was coming after me.

Hate it when that happens.

She was a girl I met down in San Antonio.  Beautiful.  Dark eyes promised a night of passion. 

And what a night it was.  We turned the sky inside out and back again.

Had to leave in the morning, with only memories to keep me company; over time, they faded.

They came roaring back to life when I saw her. 

She held a little souvenier of our night together:  a baby.

A little carbon copy of me.

Now what was I going to do?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/12)

 


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Reviewed by John Coppolella 3/1/2009
Great metaphor, Karla. Are you sure you weren't describing yourself?
Rockie Coppolella
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/4/2009
Sensual and powerful, hugely atmospheric...Love, Diana
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/12/2008
Dear Karla,

You have a captivating style which is quite unique - I greatly enjoyed this excellent story!!


Hugs and Love,

Lance

Reviewed by Richard Orey 11/14/2008
Oh, my, Karla, you surprised me here! I thought for sure we'd be talking about one of those Texas superstorms. And I was right. What I got was a superstorm of shared passion which really started moving my emotions with your "Dark eyes promised a night of passion."

But I just hate the thought of a baby, a tiny but real person, being thought of as "a little souvenier." For sure, that attitude brings "A World of Hurt." Yes, I say it's time for this stud to stop being a sperm-donor and to start being a man. Babies need fathers, not visitors.

My dear Karla, you packed an amazing amount of drama in so few lines!

A terrific piece of literature by a great writer. Well done!

Richard


Reviewed by 000 000 9/12/2008
I love your sky pictures, and the words you write. I have added this one to my library. Thanks for the tale, CarolHawks
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 8/19/2008
Lol, this is great, Carla! what's done it the dark will come to the light, for sure. I love the way you write, my Texas friend!
Reviewed by Jill curry 7/8/2008
i do so enjoy your style, my friend..your works are exquisite
Reviewed by Linda Law 6/28/2008
Karla, your writing is UNIQUE... you have a gift... enjoyed this one as well as many others! San Antonio is my "home", sure know about what you write..many of your stories are visual to me!
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 4/26/2008
Creative descriptions, Karla. Awesome!
Sheila
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 3/31/2008
You have done wonders with your writings. Only Karla can write like this. Unique and well-worth the reading.

Sandie May :o)
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 3/5/2008
Nice imagery and writing...
Reviewed by Da Lady Mystik Mystik 2/29/2008
Love the photo and the piece.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 2/23/2008
certainly a great twister Karla, had me fooled. But you can handle her. love G
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 2/12/2008
Oh Karla I understand your pain more than you may realize I ever could. I appreciate from my heart the sacrifice you made and the hurt you have suffered. You are loved.
Reviewed by Olita Williams 2/9/2008
Keep writing!!! I want more!!!! Great imagery and I love the piccy.
Hugs from down under.
Reviewed by Ace Antonio Hall 2/5/2008
With all the winds you've been through, I understand the inspiration...Your imagery and word choice more visual than any picture; powerful, and quaintly sexy. You seemed to have written this in December, but of course a good write is timeless.
Great work.
Reviewed by Eileen Granfors 1/25/2008
I like the double-edge in this, and the photo too. Ca I put a picture on a blog page? Eileen
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 1/12/2008
I enjoyed reading this and quite interesting the metaphors used and the personifications of such.

Awesome!

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut 1/3/2008
Wonderful story, love the connection between the stormy relationship and the real storm. terrific!!!!Sandi
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 12/27/2007
Wonderful caring intense package Karla~!
BE SAFE!
Warm hugs and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Reviewed by Carol Rzadkiewicz 12/21/2007
Karla,
This poem is so beautifully written and so very profound. I love your use of imagery and the sub-text is powerful.

--Carol
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 12/20/2007
Lol ... indeed.

God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Mary Coe 12/13/2007
LoL!!!!!! Thanks for the humor. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 12/13/2007
Very nice, thank you for sharing.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/13/2007
Lol....thanks for shating...you are toooo funny!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 12/13/2007
Yep, I saw one of those little funnel thingys one day and told my friend someone is in for it. Not really a tornado yet, but headed for one. Sure enough they were. Thankfully it landed up the road a piece.

Walt
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/13/2007
A unique and I must say lovely turn of style for you that I enjoyed tremendously. Well done.

Fee
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/12/2007
This is great Karla thanks for the laughs
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough 12/12/2007
Oh my goodness! WOW!
Love,
annie
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/12/2007
wow-a lot packed into this little write!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/12/2007
Uh oh, indeed! It's about time he pays the fiddler! LOL He's been fiddlin' around; he's been a baaaaaaaaaaaad boy, hasn't he?? Cute write; very well penned1 Love the pic! YIKES.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

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