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Stay or Go-Micro Fiction
By D L Johnson
Tuesday, November 09, 2010

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More micro fiction based on my next trip to the casino

Micro Fiction- Stay or Go

Dan Johnson

(c) 2010, November

Another new dealer, I’ve been sitting here forever, it’s dark outside. That means I’ve been here for 15 hours. Dealer shuffles, bets placed, here they come; ace, another ace, now two more aces, I bet on each card, now playing four aces, she flips first card, a nine, next card, jack, third card, queen, last card, damn, I missed the bus………


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Reviewed by CJ Heck 6/8/2011
Hello Dan, nice to 'meet' you. You are certainly good at the micro fiction. I love writing it, too, but tend more towards the flash fiction. I commend you -- you have a real knack!
Hugs to you,
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 11/17/2010
I guess your staying. Sneaky dealer. Patrick

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A Story is a Promise & The Spirit of Storytelling offers exciting new insights into the craft of writing...  
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