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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
4/6/2004 |
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| I have to go with C. Lee McKenzie on this one when I say this, you got a strong write here. You should make this one at least about three pages longer. Expand the paragraphs, it is very descriptive but you need to make them a little longer. It is a very human story, and that is the kind I seem to relate to in the sense of the way it is written. Very relatable characters with this one. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
9/9/2002 |
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| Well I loved this coming from a family of firefighters maybe why? But I think it was your excellent writing abilities that brought this home to me;) |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
7/9/2002 |
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| good read....... ;0) |
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| Reviewed by C. Lee McKenzie |
3/20/2002 |
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| Well, I like it. It's a piece of the bigger story--a slice out of a day on duty. Have you considered putting it into a larger context? Say a novella with a diary entry format. It is most assuredly true that when you write about what you know or love, the writing is strong. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria Murray |
12/30/2001 |
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Another compelling short story. Maybe you should consider writing a book!
Victoria |
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