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Hallel Hallel Alleluia...
By Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Monday, May 17, 2010

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I spoke with a woman the other day in a temple of worship & she spoke to me about "eye sores"
I of course stood up to that plate because I do not find "Old Decrepit Buildings" as she described it to me
as "eye sores" I find them utterly beautiful...(it is diversity of opinion course)
Our ancestors built beauty & durability...
History is everywhere even in barns & fences...
(This photo is not the "eye sore" she spoke of)

But the point was a house of worship & not a place to ridicule the building to strangers & in turn the people associated with it...
no matter where you go in life
you can see a persons true colors no matter their thrones they use as decorations...
respect is always important & knowing an oppinion always differs from others too...but I wonder why people need to approach other people with all their rude garbage? Does it really matter? it does not as being loving matters so much more


Hallel Hallel Alleluia…
Song bells ring hallelujah
Hallelujah hallelujah
The doors are open hallelujah
Hallelujah hallelujah
The people gather halleluiah
Halleluiah halleluiah…
Their word is spreading halleluiah halleluiah
Their sins are forgiven halleluiah halleluiah
Their souls embrace halleluiah halleluiah
The pews are full halleluiah halleluiah
The plate is passed halleluiah halleluiah…
The offerings are in halleluiah halleluiah
The preacher praises them halleluiah halleluiah
Salvation is theirs halleluiah halleluiah…
I watch them leave the gospel temple
Hallel Hallel Alleluia
I people watch in truth & wonder…
Hallel Hallel Alleluia
I said, I see their truths Hallel Hallel Alleluia…
(Written: May 17th, 2010 7:08 a/m)
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Love’s Bounty Embracing Unisons of Truth
Hallel Hallel Alleluia…
Copyright© 2010 Poetess Victoria L. McColley
























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Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/18/2010
People in New Orleans are going dancing to church, praise the Lord and smile to me a couple of halleluiahs!!! (LOL)


Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/17/2010
Vickie, you share the beauty of the light of truth in this rendering my friend -- most structures are representative of the love of the people that built them -- surely there is beauty to be found in each and every one of them -- may peace and love be always with you my -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by David cox 5/17/2010
love the music and the poem maybe you should try to put the words to music create a hymn,
and as you say nothing is an eyesore as evrything was created by someone and in their eyes there lies the beauty,
stay happy.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/17/2010
Thank you for spreading some sunshine today!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber Viv

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