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Darkled Mind of Truth (dark poetry)
By Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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DARK POETRY OCTOBER 2010

Darkled Mind of Truth

He spoke the fecalith venom of insidious lies;
Scheming curses inside the damnations of man.
Dancing around the ruinous foundations of trespass
vipers continue lurking through a conscious mastery;
skulking as the bowels of deviltry’s evil…

His words prodded the sorrower's dwell of dreams,
raving with pain across the mast of the future.
A verbal sphincter desecrating his coprolite hands,
as the unyielding walls cracked with torment’s mindful disease.
The veining lust which grips the loins of sinner’s purpose
remains a hidden cryptic within the darkled mind of truth…

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/16/2010

Vickie, this is intense and marvelous. "Sphincters" and
"fecalith venom" truly belong in the same stanza. They support each other verbally and physically. "Darkled Mind of Truth" conjures up the specter of deep rooted evil to me. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Donna Chandler 10/14/2010

Intense words describing darkness.

Donna

Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/13/2010

"A verbal sphincter desecrating his coprolite hands"...
Now that's pure Victoria L. McColley, and I love it.
-gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/12/2010

Truly intense and with strong vocalization...well done Vic.
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