That sounds cool. The story had a good flow to it, I like the title. Reminds me of some of the people who read my work and asked me if I played rpg's but told them I don't because it would take the effectiveness away from what I did. That one was nicely done and very creative.
Reviewed by Brett Pransky (Reader)
Not bad, not bad at all. I knew what the end of the story was going to be somewhere in the middle, but that didn't take away from a story that flowed pretty well.