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Too Many Elves
By Nicholas S Stember
Last edited: Thursday, May 13, 2004
Posted: Tuesday, March 30, 2004
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A light hearted fantasy that intrudes into a role-playing game. It was published in the January, 2004 issue of Twilight Times.
Approx. 2200 words long.
Copyright 2003 - Nicholas S. Stember
Follow this link to see the story (and check out the ezine, it has a lot of good stories in it).
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Site: Twilight Times
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| Reviewed by John Bushore |
9/30/2006 |
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Very good. A fantasy about a fantasy game. No wonder it was accepted. Good writing. I'll be back to read more. And I see Nick P. enjoyed it, too. He's a good judge, but then I'm prejudiced.
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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
4/11/2004 |
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| That sounds cool. The story had a good flow to it, I like the title. Reminds me of some of the people who read my work and asked me if I played rpg's but told them I don't because it would take the effectiveness away from what I did. That one was nicely done and very creative. |
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| Reviewed by Brett Pransky (Reader) |
4/1/2004 |
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| Not bad, not bad at all. I knew what the end of the story was going to be somewhere in the middle, but that didn't take away from a story that flowed pretty well. |
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