Acting in the wrong manner meant losing a friend.
You once knew I existed as I sure insisted.
Suddenly you walked away as I went about it the wrong way and left in dismay.
Since I came on to strong and certainly wrong .
Now you closed the door leaving me ignored.
I only wish for more and not to be ignored.
Though my heart must break as I made such a mistake.
Being new at this game and am to blame in shame.
Knowing now how costly my foolish actions were, as I must simply be ignored.
Since I now ruined such a good thing and wonder that if I only went about it differently it might have turned out perfectly .
Instead strangers we become as we pass each other and then run. .
I am now among the distant crowd with a frown feeling so down .
Since your not around, as you become lost and never found.
My head turns round and round like a merry go round hoping that you are to be found?
Although your never around as my world turns completely upside down.
Might I say how truly wrong was I and thats no lie as we now hide among the crowd I must shout aloud .
In hopes that maybe he may pass my way and just to say hey?
When I will sure say I totally acted the wrong way!
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Although I admire the honest approach that you share within your verses here, Laura Lee; I think perhaps you are being a bit too harsh on yourself. That is just my opinion meant with respect of course. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by karen logan
|look within Laura, forgiving yourself is not always easy, but we are all here to learn the lessons so we can rise above the clutches of earthy envy and pride and grow with light.Thanks for sharing. Karen|
|Reviewed by Marcia Roberts
|Kudos Laura! All relationships are hard but the honesty of this poem is lovely. It says, "I am human, I'm sorry". Well done!|