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Afzal! Your poems came out with a piece of advice, but indirect advice. You are really a wonderful poet. I mean in order to try to figure out what is happening in this world, including being in love, because even lovers need peace, need to be in deep love. Some are betrayed and that's what was in one of your poems, that your beloved faced you with a different facade and not with her nature. It's really good to treat subjects like that .
(You are really a wonderful poet Afzal !)
I read some of your poems, and they are really awesome. Each poems create a certain situation, all your poems create what we are living today, such as; cruelty, beauty, love. But the general idea is peace, because nowadays we lack peace in this beautiful world, we lack peace in the mind and peace in our lives.
Nowadays people are so brutal towards their fellows. the rich people are using the pauper ones.
Afzal! Your poems came out with a piece of advice, but indirect advice. You are really a wonderful poet. I mean in order to try to figure out what is happening in this world, including being in love, because even lovers need peace, need to be in deep love. Some are betrayed and that's what was in one of your poems, that your beloved faced you with a different facade and not with her nature. It's really good to treat subjects like that .
In this life we need writers and poets to speak about humanity, torture, life, peace and love.
In your poem “A Dream Or True Reality”, you really figured out the real peace, you even used metaphors. Human beings do not know the true peace, whereas animals are living the peace.
In this world there are murders, lies and betrayals and so on. But we are humans and that should not be in our lives, because we are the ones who have brains and we think. We differentiate between the right things and the wrong things.
It's really fantastic to try to spread love and peace through pen and via poetry, because that's what we need in life. You are really a magnificent poet, trying to make peace in the world, between mankind. Using metaphors made your poems more awesome.
You want justice to spread all over the world. You want justice to be between human beings and that's really great. Some folks are living with an injustice, some people are really cruel, living without love. That's why love and peace are related, that's what we need in order to create a perfect world.
Your poems are so powerful, and you choose such strong words and that's what makes your poems so meaningful.
People now are living in worries, in lies and so on what you treated in your poems is what we need Peace and Love. I wrote this poem for you dear friend Afzal !. Hope you like and feel it too….
She's In Love
He took her heart
He did that in one night
She wanted to be with him
But the distance is between them
She’s scared to be in deep love with him
Though he’s sinking in her love’s ocean
He feels towards her a pure and innocent emotion
She didn’t know how to be in love
He taught her the real meaning of love
He described her as Cruel Beauty Queen
She’s never been described by a Queen
She’s in love with the love’s King
(Written By: Sihem Boubekeur)
Thank you for sharing your awesome Poems …Dear Afzal, the ideal searcher and peace dreamer.
Sihem Boubekeur
Sidi Bel Abbes / ALGERIA
www.poemhunter.com/boubekeur-sihem