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Relax …No need to fight or be up tight
strife and depression will shorten
When the worlds tribulation appears to
aggravate your nerves then throws an
so you do not know what to do…
Or it seems you have
digested situations more than you can
Don’t stress nor absorb the pressures of
life’s negative mess.
Just embrace God’s liberty of serenity
and calm down.
Close your eyes to unwind then tell yourself
not to worry but allow patience to come
into your soul.
Remember that God’s peace is in