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More than words can ever breathe
By Art Sun
Rated "G" by the Author.
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edited: Sunday, February 05, 2012
Posted: Thursday, October 20, 2011
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Starved by the inability to view more than words can ever breathe
Embedded
Within the core of pupils
No sound to listen to
No voice
Nothing to make sense
Of that depth
Those emotions
Bottled within the mind
My thoughts confuse even me
For it is the touch
That sensation where we
Capture
An aura of understanding
Craved like a hunger
Starved by the inability
To view
More than words can ever breathe
By Art Sun
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
11/17/2011 |
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As many times that i have read this amezing piece
Your words still leaves me breathless
and speechless such beautiful tenderness
and intense deep feelings takes my breath away
Brilliant poem that could only have been
written with the quill of your heart
Te Amo con todas las fuerzas te mi alma
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
10/22/2011 |
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Beautiful!
And I'm moved to share that in my marriage of almost sixty years, I often realize that I love my precious partner more that words can ever breathe.
Thanks for sharing, Dear Friend Art.
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