edited: Tuesday, January 21, 2003
By xainab dadabhoy
Posted: Tuesday, January 21, 2003
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A state of loneliness and despair
At times, the need for companionship is totally eliminated from its roots. I feel as if the world has come to a standstill and the virtues and vices of life are oblivious to existence. My soul feels trapped in an imposter where as I think that I am walking in an endless race, runing for existence, not life, mere existence. The ever elusive search for my own self doesnt seem to cease. Occasionally, the feel or the need for crossing these end bridges of better and worse donot seem to hold worth.
Life seems to have simmered down after crashing noisily against the shores. Extremity in thought, touch and feel are at every verge of life where as the heart is numb and dormant in itself.
Hands feel empty, fingers twitch, heart aches and body weep and when the physical outline is incapable of containing the magnitude of these emotions, the mind gives way to the heart where as the soul rules and the body weeps.
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|Reviewed by Annie Khan
|Knowing you personally and getting a chance to spend time with you, I know very well what makes you write an article with the title "Loneliness" and I can imagine what you have gone through and what you must have felt. The reason why you write such good articles with emotion, in my opinion, is that you have seen both life and death from too close unlike other teenagers.. and that's what give you an edge over others. All in all, good work!|
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Body weeps...I love that...|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Qamar Abbasi
|There is somebody up there watching over all of us... always try to bend situation in your own favor, if however, things start to get out of your hands, just go with the flow....
Enjoyed your work.. good write
|Reviewed by Basit Ghafoor
|I have read your article and have just found the solitude in which you are living. Person feels emotionally turned on after readi9ng your article. Good Work Xainab|