|Reviewed by julie
|well Michael,lets hope the people that read this take note, and don't drink and drive|
|Reviewed by Sibyl
|That one should be on TV...as a reminder to all of us. Excellent|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Oh Michael--such an intensely moving write!
So heartbreaking...and a warning for all!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wow I was not expecting that ending at all. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Powerful my friend and reminds us all not to drink and drive. Good message.
|Reviewed by David J Knight
|Well written, it's a pity this message fails to get through to the actual people that cause the problem.|
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Great write Michael!|
|Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
|powerful writing michael,,,some of lifes greatest lessons are learned thru the sadness of others,may we all learn,,Charlie|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Wonderful yet sad piece. Food for thought!
|Reviewed by Florence Fry
|Sad, but helped me to understand something of what it might be like for him. A wonderful poem.|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Powerful...Reminds one not to take things for granted, like walking|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
A poignant tale of how quickly a life can change. Thanks for sharing.
Love and Light