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Fiction Craft: An Introduction
By Robert L   
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Last edited: Monday, April 22, 2013
Posted: Wednesday, February 07, 2001

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Robert Ferrier is author of four young adult novels at SynergEbooks

Fiction Craft Column: An Introduction


Robert Ferrier

As a beginning novelist 20 years ago, I knew writers who worried about choosing a premise, writing to the market or obtaining an agent.

I, on the other hand, thirsted for knowledge of fiction craft.

Novelists build stories from blocks, just as workmen build houses from bricks. To build our story house, we must know the materials, tools and techniques of our craft. I gained knowledge the hard way: by attending classes, writers conferences and workshops. I learned from published authors. I joined writing groups. I read novels and instructional books. Most importantly, I completed eight novels and started several others. Every level in the New York publishing industry rejected me, from associate editor to executive publisher.


How did I avoid quitting? By feeding "the critter" inside me. The beast subsists on the words I write. Salvation arrived in electronic publishing. E-book editors ignore marketing niches and gobble fresh, well-crafted stories. Barbara Quanbeck and Lesley Ehrhart at Word Wrangler Publishing heard my creative voice. They accepted the books, "The Witchery Way," "Dear Mr. Kapps" and "The Virtual Guard."

How do you separate your work from the slush that floods publishers' desks? By knowing and using fiction craft -- the building blocks of story.

In the coming months, I will share the techniques I've learned over two decades. Supplement this knowledge with your own writing, reading, study and professional relationships. Then feed your creative side and feel the rush of writing from your heart.


In this column we begin by exploring the engine which drives all commercial
novels: Scene. Later columns will cover sequel, viewpoint, characterization, plot structure, dialogue and voice.

Scene: A unit of conflict experienced moment-by-moment by the reader
through the character's viewpoint. The elements of scene include goal, conflict and disaster. A scene goal represents something that a character wants or needs to achieve the story quest.

Examples include, but are not limited to:

* Possession (such as a clue, a piece of information, victory in a confrontation)

* Relief (from danger, fear, domination, loneliness, poverty or revenge) from loss, betrayal or injury.

Scene goals must advance the viewpoint character's story quest. For
example, here's the scene goal from Chapter 3 of "The Witchery Way" -- Josh
Wade must convince Joe Buck to give him a job on the Choctaw railroad, thus
providing a secret opportunity to learn who is sabotaging the line.

Scene goals force the viewpoint character to take immediate, specific and
concrete steps, requiring both decision and action. These goals loom large in the character's story quest. In other words, something vital must be at stake.

Next: Scene Conflict

Suggested Reading:

* "Techniques of the SellingWriter" by Dwight V. Swain
* "Scene and Structure" by Jack M. Bickham
* "Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting"
by Robert McKee

2000 Robert Ferrier

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Reviewed by Sandra 11/17/2002
I thoroughly enjoyed your articles. I printed them all out to use as reference. They are informative and interesting. The one I need right now is on revising the novel. You have made some really good suggestions there. Thank you very much.

Sandra Merz.

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