I love You
edited: Thursday, February 12, 2009
By Helen M Ide
Rated "G" by the Author.
Posted: Thursday, February 12, 2009
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I Love You
I thought I would write you a poem,
Then I thought why not,
Then I thought of a sonnett where my words would be so true ,
I tried to write you a story but the words just wouldnt flow,
So I asked myself a question and this is my reply
After all how can words express such warmth and desire,
How could they possibly capture all the things about you that I admire,
So instead I will write my own words to you though they may not be poetic,
I love you from the deepest part of my heart, my soul, and my mind,
written very simply,
"I will love you for all time,"
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|Reviewed by Dr Benard Etta
|Helen,I am inspire by your title "I love you".I think the power of true love can change the world.Love is not what one can recieve from another,but what one can give.Best wishes,Your friend Benard|
|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|This is very beautiful. Though you have it classified as an article, it is really freely expressed poetry. Words often escape us when we describe the transendental and the eternal. Susan|