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Upon Dewberries
By Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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edited: Monday, January 07, 2013
Posted: Friday, June 11, 2010
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we walked up to the pines-
the bee hives hummed in song...
candify your thoughts
tasting raw honey
licking the combs
suckling our tongues
upon finger tips dipping
tracing my name
sweet & sticky
pureness
upon your naked body
slowly
lingering
with my breath and flesh
listening to your pleasure
sweetened by your words
fawning upon dewberries
as your demanding lips press
to kiss
supple moments
hungering
for more...
(Written: June 11th, 2010 10:20 a/m)
© Poetess Victoria L. McColley
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/13/2010 |
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| Yes, more! -- very sensual and erotic poem Vickie -- with that something extra that you always seem to garner from your creative magination -- may peace and love be always with you my dear friend --Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by David cox |
6/12/2010 |
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wow! bring on the dewberries vickie,
Dave |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/11/2010 |
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soft sensuality that sings it's own song...
fee |
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