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Blogs by Kimmy Van Kooten
Going With The Flow~"
11/21/2006 4:46:40 AM
Interesting reviews...
from different points of view, namingly different genders...I so far...have noticed how the women think... "Yeah! This is great!" And the men think I'm either hailing the "monthly"...so to speak or telling ME to get rid of him...!
I find this very interesting as...my intentions were;
My first stanza shows a relationship at its peak...in all the usual tort, my second shows that continual "bitchin" will get you less than when you started,(from dinner on the Rhine to Denny's); the third, even more less attention, more "bitchin" and the beginnings of his ignorance, with taking matters at hand, begin to arise and they resort to name calling,etc...
until you get to the end...
Now this is the twist...regardless of the effects of her "bitchin" all the time...HE apologizes for his own pleasures and she retorts to hers, REVENGE!(by using her made-up excuse!) No rag here!
So ladies...ponder, learn to be nice...for the river Rhine awaits! Like my mother always said..."You get more with honey than you do with vinegar!"
Now...if you really want to dig into this 'flow" there is one comment I want to make about men...Why is it when we comment on your faults...such as, You spilled your coffee! You repeat, exactly what we say...but then you put a question mark at the end? It's amazing...cause it happens every time!
Well, I'm just, "Going with the flow~ "~ ~ ~
Have a GREAT Holiday Season and
be nice to your men, and women,
don't play games,
don't take revenge, especially with your attributes,
AND don't apologize ,just to get some...
apologize because you mean it!
Smiles to you ALL~ ~ ~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
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More Blogs by Kimmy Van Kooten
• Going With The Flow~" - Tuesday, November 21, 2006
• My Last Write to Women - Sunday, November 05, 2006
• My Last Write to Men - Friday, November 03, 2006
• I Saw Two Tables - Saturday, October 28, 2006
• Eros Forest", One Hot Poem!, - Thursday, October 19, 2006
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