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· Home for the Holidays

· Unleash Your Inner Strength! FREE!

· Whispers at Ghost Point

· Never Surrender

· No Turning Back

· Do YOU Have The Power?

· Writing Techniques - Character POV

· New Christmas short story - .99

· Sequel coming soon to Never Surrender

· Wednesday Hump Day at Love, Lust and Lipstick Stains!

· My short motivational book is FREE & just hit the #2 spot at Amazon!

· Character Dana and Sarah from Whispers at Ghost Point

· My interview at Karenna Colcroft's Blog

· Interview with my heroes from Never Surrender

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Home for the Holidays

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No Turning Back

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Whispers at Ghost Point

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Unleash Your Inner Strength! FREE!

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Never Surrender

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Blogs by Deanna Jewel

A little something to help bring your writing alive!
10/9/2010 11:42:01 AM    [ Flag as Spam or Inappropriate ]

There is a reason you read that book so fast! It has to do with character Point of View (POV)
Have you wondered what it was exactly that made you fall in love with the last book you read? I mean the one that totally pulled you right into the story to become one of the characters in the book? The words would have swirled around you with such comfort you found yourself on page 52 before you realized you were that far into the story. You felt what the characters were feeling, smelling, touching...the amazing ability of a writer to do that for you is not something that just happens. The author knows how to pull you in without you realizing it.

Next time you pick up a book, try to pay attention to the point of view in the story. For those who don't know what that is, it's being in the head of the main characters. Take for instance the heroine - she lets you know what she thinks about things, how she feels when she sees a man who makes her heart skip a beat or how the sound of trickling water over stones in a stream immediately calms her down. A good author will not be in one head for a paragraph, then hop into another character's head and back to the main character. The writer will stay with the main character's thoughts for a full scene or more, sometimes a full chapter. This type of writing keeps the reader moving along smoothly in the story.

If the author head hops, this will cause the reader to have to go back and reread lines or paragraphs in order to remember who's thoughts were the correct character. Try to watch for that next time you read. If you find that you zip right through a book, it's because the author wrote so you didn't have to reread lines again and again to figure out whose head you were in.

Does this make any sense to you? LOL Some will read a few pages in the store before they purchase a book to look for this exact thing. Does the author head hop? If so, it will take you longer to read a book this way because you will be confused as you read. Head hopping makes the reader dizzy and I find myself doing that also when I read an author who head hops. It's just irritating to me as a reader. I hate having to go back and reread paragraphs to figure out where I should be.

I hope I haven't ruined you for reading some of the great books out there. Just because head hopping goes on in the writing doesn't mean the book is bad, it may just take you longer to get through it. Have you read books that you've had to do this? How did you feel when you had to keep going back to reread? Thanks for sharing with us!

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More Blogs by Deanna Jewel
• Recent convention, upcoming sequel - Monday, July 21, 2014
• Erotic excerpt of Never Surrender - a Native American time travel - Sunday, June 09, 2013
• Romantic Suspense at a Lighthouse! - Saturday, February 23, 2013
• .99 sale for historical romance - Sunday, November 04, 2012
• NOW on SALE! .99 for No Turning Back - Friday, October 12, 2012
• Update on Whispers at Ghost Point - Tuesday, July 19, 2011
• Upcoming release for Sept 2011 - Whispers at Ghost Point - Monday, April 25, 2011
• My historical romance set in England 1778 - Sunday, February 27, 2011
• A Great Christmas Gift - book sale! - Monday, December 13, 2010
• Calling all chocolate lovers! - Sunday, October 24, 2010
• Character Interview w/both heroes from Never Surrender - Thursday, October 14, 2010
•  A little something to help bring your writing alive! - Saturday, October 09, 2010  
• Enjoy reading time travel romance? Stop in! - Sunday, August 29, 2010
• Thank you all! - Wednesday, August 18, 2010
• What draws you to a new author? - Saturday, August 14, 2010
• No Turning Back - interview with the hero! - Tuesday, July 27, 2010
• Excerpt of Never Surrender time travel - Friday, July 23, 2010
• Work in progress - Whispers at Ghost Point - Thursday, July 22, 2010

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