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· Soldier's Gap


Short Stories
· Seminary Boy, a memoir

· Fisher of Men, Chapter Nine

· Soldier's Gap, Chapter Three

· Honest Thief, Tender Murderer, Chapter Nine

· Fisher of Men, Chapter 8

· Honest Thief, Tender Murderer, Chapter Eight

· Mengele's Double, Chapter Eight

· Bereavement Blues

· Fisher of Men, Chapter 7

· Speed Dating With 'Janeane Garofalo'


Articles
· The God Particle

· Empire of Sin, book review

· SCIENCE AT THE EDGE, book review

· Obama, a Modern Caesar?

· Americans Need to Pull Together

· Voices of the French Revolution, book review

· Great American Scandals

· Odd Man Out, book review

· Portrait of a Killer, book review

· Capital in the 21st Century, book review


Poetry
· Widow's Peak

· Myth

· Alumni Game

· Stradivarius

· Snow-a-holic

· Girls Who Wear Glasses

· The Do Drop Inn

· Ode to Neve Campbell

· Jacks or Better 101

· Never My Love

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Scene outline
8/11/2009 9:20:32 AM
Novelists, beginning novelists especially, should plan their scenes. Each person should make his or her own. Without one, there's a tendency to get stuck or to wander around aimlessly. Sometimes I make one and don't even look at it, but it's there when I need it.



Perhaps the two most important things a writer needs to learn before beginning a novel are point of view and how to write a scene. More on point of view later. I think itís a good idea to chart or outline a scene, especially a dramatic scene, before you begin to write. There are a number of things that go into writing a scene that absolutely must be there. One thing you might do is to find a good author to imitate. A great one to is Anne Tyler in THE ACCIDENTAL TOURIST. You need to hook your reader and she certainly does.

Every writer should make his or her own guide. This is the one I use. I stole most of it from THE WEEKEND NOVELIST by Robert Ray, an excellent source book for beginning writers.

Scene Outline

State set-up: Time, temp, place, lighting, season

Props: Characters should react with the environment. Example. ďI donít think I like that idea,Ē John said, playing with the keys in his pocket. Thatís called a beat. Youíll need lots of them, but donít put them too close together, especially beginning with a present participle.

Sounds, smells, tastes, tactile impressions, sights. Anne Tyler uses rain to good effect in THE ACCIDENTAL TOURIST.

Characters/relationships.

What does your lead character want? Whatís his/her goal?

What does your antagonist want?

Conflict? What is it? Man vs. man, man vs. himself, man vs. nature? More specifically, what is it?

Action/reaction

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Climax:

Exit line:

Your exit line should hook your reader on the next scene. Generally thereís another problem your main character needs to think about. Have him consider the options, pick a solution and move into the next scene. This is usually done through narration called a sequel. Itís not a scene, although there can be a little one buried within the sequel.

In THE ACCIDENTAL TOURIST, the main characterís wife has just asked him for a divorce, so heís got a lot to consider. Thereís also lots of emotion, which generally hooks the reader.

Dave Schwinghammer's published novel, SOLDIER'S GAP, is available at a discount on Amazon.com. Used copies also available.


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