I read the prologue and three chapters. I want more. I'm hooked, wondering
what's going to happen next.
Are you going to tie the prologue information into the story somehow, ala Da Vinci Code perhaps? Celts & Brits, Heart & Head... Interesting theory.
Great story so far -- really gets the issues out there through the voices of compelling characters.
As an educator myself, the pressure on the protagonist to change a grade for the wealthy benefactor's son really got my blood boiling!
A few errors here and there -- nothing major. If you decide to hire an editor down the road, I'd like an opportunity to bid on it.
Is this the story you pitched at CAPA-U? What did the agent think of it? Best,
From Somewhere in the Inishowen,
From the very first sentence I was captivated. Yes, continue the tale, (or
will it be a mix of history and fiction)? Patrick
Hi Mel....this could become a best seller!.... jr
Great Job Mel. Norwood
Your novel offered a great
look at the politics in the ivory tower.
I enjoyed reading it and idenfied with your main charater
closely. I am looking forward to reading more.
Good luck with chapter 5. Take care and have fun. Anne Marie