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Interlude ( A bothering)
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U and I have 2 talk. ( personal)

Can we talk 4 a minute about our relationship and its's meaning,....if there was one?

So, whats' going on with us?
Do we understand each other?
I feel theres' a problem, so can we just talk about it?

Why the lies? Why the Deceit, the rumors?

I don't understand these complications are of us. If we cannot communicate, then I suggest that we go our seperate ways.

This bothers me.

Strange it is on how we feel, cause it seems that you're in denial about it, so I say unto u that there is nothing between us but a misunderstanding of an apology that was.

Guess, I shouldn't of started it off with, "We need 2 talk", cause u just twisted the whole thing and took it as if I were suggesting that we should get 2gether. We are not 2gether nor will we be, so get over it.

Damn!

How u amuse me, especially with your assumptions, cause I'm not with u or sleeping with u, or even talking with u.

Damn, this is a problem 4 me, so in a word, I suggest we chill 4 a minute.

Yeah, I suggest we chill 4 a minute. Better yet, u chill 4 a minute. Cause 4 now, your bridge is burned.


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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
This one wasn't 2 deep for me (like "Emulsion"), but I think u 2 shd've talked it over. Might've been a more interesting read. Go talk & tell us what was said. :)
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
I am just not much of a fan of the internet lingo (I am 2 in love w/ u 4 my own good) or anything like that, but the poem was great!
Reviewed by jude forese
enjoyed this discussion with yourself ;)
Reviewed by ladybugg robertson (Reader)
that one was really good but the question is...... who are you talking about see ya!
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
i was so tempted to give you a 4, just to keep everything in line HA but i think you really get a 10, for creativity of expression and emotion portrayal.
well done
josie
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