Everwanting ( A longing for true love)
by Avatar 319
Saturday, September 21, 2002
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Gazing among u, I find myself consumed. So much 2 endure of u, so many 2 make amends 2.
U called me. U called us.
The words, I love, want 2 come 2, but only cloud my mind. 2 many of u 2 say that 2, but, it doesn't make me not 2 everwant u.
U haunt us, our hearts.
U haunted me.
Love, why make me & others everwant u, 4 these maidens can not break me, but of the heart can attain thee & give the treasures that u offer.
U cause a bliss that brings 2 the mind's eye of the wanting we want ever so. Yet, u taunt & tease.
U have me & others everwanting, that which co-exist between the lines of pleasure & reality, what we call true happiness.
Some see the picture different, some feel with their soul, others don't grasp, while the one's that do show & know this is something that is everwanting.
Why is it that untamed we are till loves comes & changes everything?
The maidens do contain, 4 they are of u & when endured by either the male or female, we become tame, till tainted & induced in your 3 love reign cycle.
Damn, enchanting u are, but at the same time, so elusive. Still, the passions, the embraces & encounters don't compare 2 the truth of the love that will be of man & woman, their happines, their wholesome as one.
Come, I have something 4 u. something 4 your mind,cause I am only one that wishes 2, but , like your moments, I will wait till the right moment, till the mood is right.
Until then, let me & others embrace u, endure u, enjoy u, show us....don't keep me or others, everwanting.
They say", That there is someone 4 everybody", but, if loves is 2 be, then, what about those without?
Although, I find that love is everywhere, especially the mind & heart & as long as u love yourself you're never alone.
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|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|i welcome different styles...and this certainly is one....but everwanting sounds like a very good place to be kept at!!!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I'm not too keen on abbreviated words, just keep my eyes stumbling all over the places. My ole eyes are too tired for this.
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Not sure I understand at all what you are saying and why you are saying it, or the last review you left for me, but this is a very creative work, maybe it's just over my head! I don't know about those without, and even those who seem to be "With" may never know perfection.|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Interesting write, excellent question... Wonder if anyone truly has the answer.|