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Everwanting ( A longing for true love)
by Avatar 319

Saturday, September 21, 2002

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Gazing among u, I find myself consumed. So much 2 endure of u, so many 2 make amends 2.

U called me. U called us.

The words, I love, want 2 come 2, but only cloud my mind. 2 many of u 2 say that 2, but, it doesn't make me not 2 everwant u.

U haunt us, our hearts.
U haunted me.

Love, why make me & others everwant u, 4 these maidens can not break me, but of the heart can attain thee & give the treasures that u offer.

U cause a bliss that brings 2 the mind's eye of the wanting we want ever so. Yet, u taunt & tease.

U have me & others everwanting, that which co-exist between the lines of pleasure & reality, what we call true happiness.

Some see the picture different, some feel with their soul, others don't grasp, while the one's that do show & know this is something that is everwanting.

Why is it that untamed we are till loves comes & changes everything?

The maidens do contain, 4 they are of u & when endured by either the male or female, we become tame, till tainted & induced in your 3 love reign cycle.

Damn, enchanting u are, but at the same time, so elusive. Still, the passions, the embraces & encounters don't compare 2 the truth of the love that will be of man & woman, their happines, their wholesome as one.

Come, I have something 4 u. something 4 your mind,cause I am only one that wishes 2, but , like your moments, I will wait till the right moment, till the mood is right.

Until then, let me & others embrace u, endure u, enjoy u, show us....don't keep me or others, everwanting.


They say", That there is someone 4 everybody", but, if loves is 2 be, then, what about those without?

Although, I find that love is everywhere, especially the mind & heart & as long as u love yourself you're never alone.

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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/22/2002
i welcome different styles...and this certainly is one....but everwanting sounds like a very good place to be kept at!!!
Reviewed by jude forese 9/22/2002
intesting message...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/22/2002
I'm not too keen on abbreviated words, just keep my eyes stumbling all over the places. My ole eyes are too tired for this.


Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm 9/21/2002
Great write.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/21/2002
Not sure I understand at all what you are saying and why you are saying it, or the last review you left for me, but this is a very creative work, maybe it's just over my head! I don't know about those without, and even those who seem to be "With" may never know perfection.
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 9/21/2002
Interesting write, excellent question... Wonder if anyone truly has the answer.
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