The Beckoned by Jack and Anita
by Jack R Roberts
Tuesday, April 04, 2006
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Sometimes it takes beautiful words to inspire you to write again. Thank you Anita.
Splash in kisses from the sea
Beneath the moon, come dive with me
The air I share, will be your own
Come touch the depths I call my home
But first a kiss, for mortal lips
As darkest length, of waters dip
Fear not dear sailor, of such lust
Trust my kisses, match my touch
Relax and float upon the waves
And dream of all you ever craved
Upon my breast, find languid rest
For you've been chosen.....and possessed
Come down, come down, we're almost there
Feel free...alive...without your air
Embrace the change, man of the land
For now your earth, is ocean sand
I hear her calling from the deep
For me to take a trusted leap
She beckons from the depths , come home
To share a world unlike my own
A misty spell she casts on me
That draws me out to deeper sea
She takes me softly by the hand
And lures me to her liquid land
Her hair is gold, her eyes are blue
Her pale lips speak “I’ve longed for you.
Now take my hand and come with me
And love the treasure of the sea”
Into the depths with her I go
Deeper , deeper down below
The waters once so cold, now warm
So deep beneath the oceans storms
In a magic seashell
You’ll hear a song of love
From beneath the ocean
Far from worlds above
The whispers of two lovers
As they speak beneath the sea
Cresting with a rhythm
In love, forever free
Anita & Jack
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|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This is such a beautiful collaboration Jack and Anita, beautifully written, I just loved this.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Well. This is a beauty of a cooperative creative production. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you both,
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Hi Jack! Glad to read you again! Anita, thanks for the inspiration and the poem. I enjoyed this delightful poetic combo!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Creative work you two..thank you!!
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|You've been missed, Jack! I hope we'll fine one day that mermaids actually are one of the treasures of the sea.
Enjoyed this one.
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Perfect poetry for those of us who love the mystery of the sea.
Good to see you back.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Nice combo, you two! Bravo! Brava! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I think this combo is fabulous, but Jack (ahem)not so cool with the remark;-)I really love the poetry!
|Reviewed by A PAX
Fun to write with you again Jack!!!
Let's share a rhyme, anytime!!!